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(Post) YES U HAD TO GO

I'd be thankful if you could explain me this

I suggest you make the story until the end and I'll just add in some ideas when you're done.

Assistant goes super saiyan...
Okay then; do what you want.

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(Post) Get off that off-topic!

You don't?
Then what would you propose?

But just make sure that Johan is still possessed by the Necromancer.
And stick to him raising dead in the night; and letting his servants attack them in the morning.

By action I mean the original one I put in; where Johan gets a heavy cut with profuse bleeding; etc.

"Yes child; you are filled with dark but you shine [...]!" the old woman said.

A correction to my correction.

Well; I'm just saying that they need some more action. It's up to you whether Johan AND Shizu gets hurt or what. So long as there's some action.

No comment on this one; well done.

"Ssshshhzshzshisfhosefpwa83r7yp98& you dumb animal; someone might hear you."
"Urgh..." said a strange [...]
The warmth of his breath heated her palm.
She laid her head on the table and let her dreams entangle her mind.


Liking how this starts. Keep it up.

"Here; take this. This is meant to be yours." [...]
Cracking sounds broke the silence; which caused a support beam to fall; separating the two.
The woman screamed [...]
He saw a [...]

Chapter one's dialogue seems a bit short; try adding in some of the original lines I had placed.

He grabbed his hoe and went through the rows and finished his daily tasks.
He grabbed his throat as if he couldn't breathe.
Galeria (Only one L)
Cashed In = Returned
"Come closer my child [...]" said an old woman shrouded [...]
"Yes child; you are filled with dark but you shine [...]!" the old women said.

The Meet is rather... Boring. Add some spice using the one I sent you as a template. Add more action in the battle; let Johan get hurt.

Johan stormed [...] that old women [...]
He noticed[...] his provisions; he took his shovel [...]
A loud thud was heard and everything was silent.

i meant this

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Unit - Unit is damage
Random number between 1 and 100 less than or equal to WC_Level[index]
Hero - create 1 log for....
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icic you two are doing some contests
but hey IA can you seriously TELL ME WHAT YOU MEANT WITH THE LOG THING?
you have not reply for so long that i decided to leave a VM

Out of ideas: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin.php?id=lo7nni

I was not able to at the moment; I did not get any computer time this week. This weekend is a 3-day weekend; and we're headed to a province. There is internet there and a laptop for me to use; so yeah. I'll work on it soon.

PLEASE HEED MY WORDS !
Before posting a complete (not alpha not beta, but the COMPLETE/FINAL version of it) test map or system trigger in the Spell Workshop Thread, PLEASE send me the map first into my PM.
This is to make the thread runs smoothly as I can update the first post and put the DONE and UNDONE spell/system trigger.
However, you CAN post the map on that thread to make some deal with requester, maybe he don't want that thing, remove this, change that, bla bla.
BUT, if the map is satisfied, PLEASE post it through my PM.
Your cooperation is much needed
Thank you for listening ;D

Check on the ASSIGNED TASK button, for your first job, stay fit =D

In short, you won't be joining... ?

Which line of my word saying I need a rep... ?

Sure, sure.

Ah. Sorry.
Then turn it into a she.

No, I proof-read twice. Impossible...
Meh.

Wow, life-long friends.
I only met my crush this year.

Galeria is a city? Wow...
Well, I still saw some spelling errors on yours.

You're so lucky to get a fiancé...
I really wish the spectacularly amazing girl on my picture was my girlfriend...

What do you mean by Johan's story? Just edit it, and please, paste it on Word. You have to check for spelling errors and misuse of terms. Sorry to say but you have small mistakes, so I suggest you check it.
Definition of Terms:
Galeria - A nearby city to Johan's farm.
Rutheria - The entire province.

Helping people contest ?
Don't understand that one... ?
Just opening up spell workshop for me and for others
I improve A LOT by opening that workshop and taking requests, SERIOUSLY, no kidding

Well, my time here is 22:26 =D
The night still young =D
Well, you can join me or not (but please, join =D)

I'm sorry too, things changed, so do Humans =D
Well, are you up for the task ?
I'm just pissed off at that moment, no offence, but now I'm okay and I admit my mistake for being a jerky person, okay ?
We Humans have to stick together. -Lord Garithos

Okay, I'm gonna need fresh new applicant for my spell workshop, visit that thread and drop a comment containing either you want the job or not, we're short here =D

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(Post) Actually it was easy to do but hard to get the idea ^^ TY

By the way, how's your fiancé?

Almost done with Chapter 5.

Sorry for taking so long, and no... I wasn't able to do any work in the past 2 days. My school is extremely TIRING and if I try to work on it, my brother or my sister kicks me out. I'll try working on it tonight, I think I will be able to tonight.

I got someone else to help me out.

I'm trying to make a title screen for a pic I found for my project and make some letters for it as well named Destruction of Azeroth.

I was wondering if you could help me make it and you could have a spot in the credits in my campaign after I'm done.

Could you help me with something man?

3.

A bit rough on the edge, I wasn't able to work on it yet. My family had a small gathering, so I'll work on it again.

Back. Working on it now.

Ah, sure. I'll work on it after I get home from school (12 hours from now).

you are.. you told me youd have the new stuff with that plot you thought up of this morning

So... Who's working on it?

Nope, I just thought you were online for the whole day.
I got no problem.

You've been online for the whole day...

Ah, I see. I'll start work on it again tomorrow morning.
Good night.

The point is, do you like it?

So here.
Johan is actually the bandit lord possessed by the evil necromancer. That's the reason he's having his nightmares. At day, he's normal, but at night, the necromancer's soul has the choice to either let him act normally, or take control. Johan falls asleep, and Shinozu also falls asleep, and then Johan goes into action. He raises an army of the dead, and he only orders the army to attack in the morning, when Shinozu just wakes up.

They reach the lair of the bandit king, and Johan feels a little ill. He tells Shinozu to go ahead, and when she gets to the throne, she hears evil laughter from behind. When she looks back, she sees that Johan is possessed, and she fights him and kills him. The necromancer's spirit dissapates into the air, and Johan's body is left lifeless. That same night, she recieves nightmares, meaning that she has been possessed. With a hanging, but epic ending.

Reputation (+1):
(Post) Attempted to help me with my map, and probably solved my nr. 1 problem! Greatly appreciated.

WAIIIIT
I got an awesome plot. Just wait for it tomorrow morning.

But at least give Shinozu's apprehension some action.
Johan seems too powerful, he doesn't really fight. Shinozu already has some experience raiding properties.