Before working on a new project, ask yourself if this deserves to be on Hive. Hell, just correct
all the mistakes you made in this single 30 seconds cinematic. I vote for rejection, this is
deffinetely not what Hive should have on his maps section.
I'm sorry but you should stop map making and learn some tutorials before going into another
project. Learn to trigger, special effects, time everything correctly. I didn't need 4 seconds to read "hey Joy"
1/5 Vote for rejection.