16:38, 23rd Oct 2008
Septimus: Invalid author name, sources rejected.

This is my first map so be cool
Just tell me what do i need to improve, etc
oh, and basically tell me ... if you liked it

map file too big.... sorry..

5.3MB? Your not really expecting this to be hosted at Battle.Net, are you?

Hmm... i wonder why is it so big... just took me 20 mins to make it... and i don't want to host it on bnet of course... just a cinematic lol..

it was so bad :? terrain very bad (at least u placed some trees ) and the dialoges, story, cameras all very bad. things to improve: everything

ps: the file size has nothing to do with how long it took to finish the cinematic -.- u can import models in a few sec)

sounds logical! it is my first map !
Don't expect to have a good story! I was bored!

so what if its ur first map, even or a first map this is very bad, believe me please dont submit more maps if u know u wont get positive feedback and expecially dont submit maps that u made when u were bored :?

Lol , for a first map is good !
Good , not very good but good ...

Yeah Ramza is 100% right this is really bad and it just took u 20 mins OMG the first version of my Gun Wars map took me 7 months of work ALONE u should try making a map with effort :x this is not a recommended download I say truly and I dont want to be rude but its really bad, make a new cinematic, new idea and try making it really fun not like this

the main question is: how did u manage to make is 5mb in size