14:08, 16th Jun 2008
Septimus:

Good Point

[+]

Neutral Point

[!] Cinematic seem to be ok and short
[!] Thunder Bluff seem to be quite close

Bad Point

[-] Part 1,2 and 3 should be merge into 1 files as a cinematic campaign instead of uploading 3 different map with 3 different chapter.
[-] Some text are too long and yet the time to read it is too short. Fix that.
[-] Some text are too short and yet the time to read it is too long. Fix that.
[-] Bug detected, other than player 1. The rest of the player stay at cinematic mode only. Set it to 1 player only and remove player 2,3 and 4


Overall - 2/5
Rejected

Reason of rejected : Due to bug happen if you watch this cinematic from player 2,3 or 4 view.

You seem to had fix the bug, but you need to mention it.

By the way, it is at the edge of rejection. Please merge the 3 map into 1 campaign instead. I would leave it to pending for a moment.
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After consult with Ralle who are the webmaster of hiveworkshop. Map consists of several chapter should be upload as a campaign.

Sorry to reject your map and thank you for your cooperation.

You have to see the first map, before the others

Good Point

[+]

Neutral Point

[!] Cinematic seem to be ok and short
[!] Thunder Bluff seem to be quite close

Bad Point

[-] Part 1,2 and 3 should be merge into 1 files as a cinematic campaign instead of uploading 3 different map with 3 different chapter.
[-] Some text are too long and yet the time to read it is too short. Fix that.
[-] Some text are too short and yet the time to read it is too long. Fix that.
[-] Bug detected, other than player 1. The rest of the player stay at cinematic mode only. Set it to 1 player only and remove player 2,3 and 4


Overall - 2/5
Rejected

Reason of rejected : Due to bug happen if you watch this cinematic from player 2,3 or 4 view.