Lordaeron Crossing

Moderator · May 10, 2012

Date: 2012/May/17 02:02:35

Reasons:
Poor and lacking terrain: Terrain Tutorial
Other:
Check out the tutorials section: Tutorials
Check out the Map Development Section: Map Development Section
Check out the World Editor Help Zone (Trigger issues, object editor, overall WE issues): WE Help Zone

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Almia · May 10, 2012

Not actually the entire map(cause it doesnt feature the bottom and top parts)

sonofjay · May 10, 2012

DL~

Review later.

The review

BAD:

The terrain is dead flat
Also have many empty spaces
You got bad creep camps, your green camp is composed of 1 granite golem that can actually help each other when one is attacked
Bad item drops, one item per unit is bad
Tavern is guarded
Lack neutral building type variation, 4 mercenary camp and goblin merchant is kind bad for me.
Lack of tile variation
If players harvest lumbers on the middle part then it will become a open field
Got some open spaces between the trees, where small units can hide
Since this is a 4 player melee map, you should add neutral creeps on the starting position.

GOOD:

The terrain looks bad, but the layout seems to be balance, but having only one route to attack enemy's main base is bad.

SUGGESTIONS:

Try to fix all the bad things that I pointed out
Use height tools on terraining
Use Tile variation
Use more doodads to improve the terrain
Be creative on your next maps

Rating:
1.5/5 Good enough for your first melee.

Some notes:
Keep practicing its a good start for your first melee map. Look on blizzard's melee map for references, or you can also take a look on some custom melee maps here. I hope to see some improvements from you, melee map needs more fresh mappers.

Almia · May 10, 2012

Ok hehe, its design is kind a bit simple though,thats just my 1st map;i can be better.

eubz · May 10, 2012

Judging upon the screenshot, I can say that the terrain is flat.

Almia · May 10, 2012

Yes because i hate making Cliffs(the one that lifts the ground,not the other one is used in this terrain)

sonofjay · May 10, 2012

Review on the my older post.

Almia · May 11, 2012

thanks for the review

eubz · May 13, 2012

Have you modified the terrain yet?

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