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19:11, 2nd Sep 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected
Broken rule: invalid description.
Map:
The terrains are very dull: they all lack tile variation, environemntal doodads and you could've made them better with a fog or anything.
The triggers are a breeding place for lag, you should learn how to fix memory leaks and make triggers more efficient (mainly by using variables correctly).
The intro is useless, boring and isn't very friendly either. I'd either remove it or make it more entertaining and friendly.
The spells were a mess: some tooltips were standard, others were custom resulting in messy tooltips (you should make all tooltips iniform, meaning that every spell uses the same tooltip template), the hotkeys are messed up and their position (X, Y) is also messed up.
The spells are also all standard, there is nothing special about them.
The items are basically standard as well (some very minor changes to standard items).
The scrolls' tooltips and names are pure chaos: the names of the items you need aren't even correct, the system also messes up some scrolls.
You seriously need to work on this!
Additionally, some extemely bad grammar/spelling, bad finishing touches, you tried too hard to be funny with some heroes and failed miserably.
ap0calypse: Rejected
Broken rule: invalid description.
Map:
The terrains are very dull: they all lack tile variation, environemntal doodads and you could've made them better with a fog or anything.
The triggers are a breeding place for lag, you should learn how to fix memory leaks and make triggers more efficient (mainly by using variables correctly).
The intro is useless, boring and isn't very friendly either. I'd either remove it or make it more entertaining and friendly.
The spells were a mess: some tooltips were standard, others were custom resulting in messy tooltips (you should make all tooltips iniform, meaning that every spell uses the same tooltip template), the hotkeys are messed up and their position (X, Y) is also messed up.
The spells are also all standard, there is nothing special about them.
The items are basically standard as well (some very minor changes to standard items).
The scrolls' tooltips and names are pure chaos: the names of the items you need aren't even correct, the system also messes up some scrolls.
You seriously need to work on this!
Additionally, some extemely bad grammar/spelling, bad finishing touches, you tried too hard to be funny with some heroes and failed miserably.
