19:25, 6th Mar 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

this is my first map and my nickname is tonjie

Here's a little advice,

Fix the description or no one will look at this. And the Chapter titles already look unprofessional. Go read some Tutorials we have here, and then come back when you can compare your map with other maps, and see an equivalent quality.

Albeit cruel, it is the truth.

Well, we all have to start somewhere. The terrain looks like crap from the minimaps, but for the sake of helping out, because no matter how unprofessional and how much a campaign may suck, you have to put a bit of effort in it, I'll try it out. I'll give a complete review later.

Fix the entire Campaign. I couldn't even see Grom, only his shadow. and why did i always start with some zombies that couldn't even attack? Besides, i don't understand why Grom would have wanted the Night elves respect.

Holy crap... There's so much fail in this campaign, that I don't know where to begin. I'll just give the most important points.
The campaign has only one cinematic and it blows. No sense of victory whatsoever in any of the chapters. Maybe that's because once you finish the chapter it doesn't start the other. You can just keep on playing. Terrain SUCKED. BADLY! And in chapters 2,3,4 you cannot seriously be expecting people to hack through all those trees to get to a freakin' enemy base! I played roughly 2-3 minutes into those chapters and got bored of screwing trees with peons and demolishers. Also, too easy. Your units are SICK. I finished chapters 1 and 6 with 2 units only. Chapter 5 took 3 units, lol. Grom's model doesn't properly show. Campaign screen blows. You have all the buttons visible.

Oh well, we all have to start somewhere. I rate this 1/5 and vote for REJECTION. But don't take it too hard and don't feel bad. With a little work someday you'll be able to make a good campaign.