I played your map, and here is my review:
First of all - why there is such a small number of buildings? Make more of them.
Secondly - after first income as player red I`ve had about 14k gold...
Next - Why there is such a small number of units?
Next - Why the only improvement, which can be get in Smithy is dmg upg?
Next - The terrain lacks doodad and variations
Next (most important now) - Why the description at Hive is so short? It must be better.
So far the map can get just 1/5 and my vote for rejection.