12:12, 22nd Jun 2010
Dentothor: I would prefer that you use the 2D arts forums before starting here. It needs a whole lot more shading and detail. There isnt any anything 3D about it, except for the model. Try to have some depth to the skin and try to make it more realistic than flat. And try not to have dark outlines. It makes it look consequently flatter and more cartooney. Read some tutorials about skins that we have here on the site. They can really help. Also, Id really suggest that you improve in the 2D art section rather than here. as people may not have encouraging comments.

Umh.. Well.. It looks way too cartoonish, You've got to make details also it needs more shadows and highlights, im glad it's not an CnP atleast ^^

You need a lot better shading and highlights as well as less thick outlines. Also, an in-game\viewer screenshot would be nice.