21:49, 13th Jun 2010
Kimberly: Sorry man. But it need at least 75% freehand. It's not bad but needs alot of improvment, rather flat and dull regarding the metal. Im abit suspicious of it with legitimacy, but you need 75% freehand. I also suggest you remove the lens flare as it makes the texture on the model look blurry and blobbish ingame.
So please update it.

Kim: Perm rejected due to no update.

The texture it's blurry and the skin must be atleast 75% freehand.

Sharpen it. And it's more like an armored Hellscream.

needs more details and a LOT of definition and sharpness

That what hte guys above said but as far it is a good start.

She not so good is my first skin

Yep. Blurry and needs more freehand.
But I also think the usefulness is... lacking.

... She? Oh well anyways, as Jokemaster said, do what guys above said :3

This actually looks more like some sort of Lich King Hellscream... hm... nice idea.

maybe change the skin part a bit(coloring/texture), and change the logo on his flag to something original(maybe make it a cyberlike skull or something)

let's see.. maybe http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2d-art-tutorials-281/mr-goblins-tutorial-110127/ helps on the metal..

Is that the Lens Flare filter I see glowing on his chest?


The upper arms on the unwrap view look more like if they would fit as a blade for some kind of an axe or any other chop-esque weapon.

Needs more freehand and the metal needs too look a little more metalish.

Edit: Oh, the dudes above said that already ^^

nice nice.. still, a little blurry

more effort needed, lol