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zombie2279: Not that bad, but it's seriously too cartoonish. First of all, decrease the thick, black outlines. They really decrease the realism factor. The cloak is okay-ish, but the part on the head looks a bit weird. Since the skull is in focus, it should be given the largest amount of work, yet it seems to be the most simple. Make sure you utilize sufficient amounts of shading to make the skull somewhat realistic. Note that too cartoonish icons usually don't get approved unless they're of really high quality.
Please update once you return.
zombie2279: It's a bit messy, but enough changes are made. Approved.