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08:50, 5th Aug 2009
zombie2279: The shading is a bit messed up. I recommend removing those two shading parts from the middle of the blade and replacing them with a gap, as if a part from the blade was missing and re-doing the highlight effect. The right part of the glow looks weird aswell, blend it in with the background a bit further. It's a creative idea and quite a good execution nevertheless.
9:16, 10th Aug 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, but it looks quite acceptable.
zombie2279: The shading is a bit messed up. I recommend removing those two shading parts from the middle of the blade and replacing them with a gap, as if a part from the blade was missing and re-doing the highlight effect. The right part of the glow looks weird aswell, blend it in with the background a bit further. It's a creative idea and quite a good execution nevertheless.
9:16, 10th Aug 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, but it looks quite acceptable.