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08:50, 12th Aug 2009
zombie2279: The shape is entirely unrealistic and the whole execution is just.. lacking. The overdone contrast and the lack of shading makes it look perfectly flat. Add more emphasis on the shading and highlights, extend the upper flame effect and use more colors at both flames. Zooming in on a particular area of the rocket would help a lot, so there would be more room for details.
Rejected until updated.
zombie2279: The shape is entirely unrealistic and the whole execution is just.. lacking. The overdone contrast and the lack of shading makes it look perfectly flat. Add more emphasis on the shading and highlights, extend the upper flame effect and use more colors at both flames. Zooming in on a particular area of the rocket would help a lot, so there would be more room for details.
Rejected until updated.