BTNpiercingarmor

Moderator · Sep 2, 2009

14:40, 6th Sep 2009
oh_snap: You can't really tell what's going on. The background melds with the object I presume to be an arrow. You need to make everything more distinct.

17th Sep 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, rejected until updated.

Iyzz_Fryzz · Sep 2, 2009

is that an arrow? if it is then the stick should be thinner..
and gimme more BLOOD

EDIT: oops, i didn't read the description, its a lance
but still, it needs more BLOOD!!

Darkmoon Hero · Sep 2, 2009

The lance could be better, especially the head. It needs to look longer, and much sharper.

Kazzo · Sep 2, 2009

i will update soon with more blood pd:wtf blood addicted ? :xxd:

TheHunterKiller · Sep 2, 2009

Moar blood! Looks a bit cartoonish but it's awesome.

Kazzo · Sep 2, 2009

TheHunterKiller said:
Moar blood! Looks a bit cartoonish but it's awesome.

very happy do you like it now i update added more blood

Iyzz_Fryzz · Sep 2, 2009

blood looks like thread, make it thicker?

Justicar · Sep 2, 2009

The blood doesn't look right. Maybe make the lance end bigger and change the blood from there to be thicker.

krisserz · Sep 2, 2009

The whole icon needs more definition, and I think you should add better shape to arrow and the target.

The Panda · Sep 2, 2009

Sorry but i cant see the "Armor"

Kazzo · Sep 3, 2009

the armour is that knight grey ...maybe need to changue the name of the icon to " impale " :bored:

The Panda · Sep 5, 2009

Show the armor a bit more and make the "arrow" or whatever the object hitting the armor is more vibrant and a more textured feel to it.

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