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16:26, 22nd Oct 2014
Sin'dorei300: I appreciate ur effort, but needs more work.
There's a lot of unused space.
The background doesn't fit with the foreground, aside the fact that the difference in style and quality between them is clearly visible. The pencil is blurry and undefined, its shading is lacking.
The trail left by the pencil is too thick and in a different perspective than the pencil.
Also, as in other cases, there's no need to draw the entire pencil, but only a part of it, thus reducing unused space in the icon and emphasizing the object in question.
Sin'dorei300: I appreciate ur effort, but needs more work.
There's a lot of unused space.
The background doesn't fit with the foreground, aside the fact that the difference in style and quality between them is clearly visible. The pencil is blurry and undefined, its shading is lacking.
The trail left by the pencil is too thick and in a different perspective than the pencil.
Also, as in other cases, there's no need to draw the entire pencil, but only a part of it, thus reducing unused space in the icon and emphasizing the object in question.
