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13:37, 14th Aug 2009
zombie2279: Honestly, the only fitting thing I see is the color scheme, the rest is quite simple and lacking. First of all, it doesn't really look like a napalm bomb effect, it looks like a simple explosion. I'd advise you to do a simple burning ground effect if you want to point out it's actually napalm. If you want to stick to the explosion effect, add something exploding and add more colors to the whole thing, otherwise it's too simple. Use red, yellow, darker orange tones. You could also add particles flying. Note that these are just recommendations, you don't have to follow them, but you do have to come up with more details if you want this to get approved.
Rejected until updated.
zombie2279: Honestly, the only fitting thing I see is the color scheme, the rest is quite simple and lacking. First of all, it doesn't really look like a napalm bomb effect, it looks like a simple explosion. I'd advise you to do a simple burning ground effect if you want to point out it's actually napalm. If you want to stick to the explosion effect, add something exploding and add more colors to the whole thing, otherwise it's too simple. Use red, yellow, darker orange tones. You could also add particles flying. Note that these are just recommendations, you don't have to follow them, but you do have to come up with more details if you want this to get approved.
Rejected until updated.