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10:45, 2nd Oct 2009
Zombie.: With all honesty, it seems to be a rather weird concept by itself. The axe is pretty much out of focus and the spell effect appears to be rather messed up taking the placement of the effect's core into account. First of all, fix the point where the handle and the head meet. Add some sort of cloth or an extended wood part there, so the handle is not all lost into the background. Afterwards, try to do something with the shading. The lightning seems to be in place, but the shading is utterly missing from the metal parts. About the spark, either remove it or make it more visible with emphasising its presence by a different color scheme than the backgrounds, preferably a darker pink.
enjoy: Do as zombie. told you to. Has potential.
Zombie.: With all honesty, it seems to be a rather weird concept by itself. The axe is pretty much out of focus and the spell effect appears to be rather messed up taking the placement of the effect's core into account. First of all, fix the point where the handle and the head meet. Add some sort of cloth or an extended wood part there, so the handle is not all lost into the background. Afterwards, try to do something with the shading. The lightning seems to be in place, but the shading is utterly missing from the metal parts. About the spark, either remove it or make it more visible with emphasising its presence by a different color scheme than the backgrounds, preferably a darker pink.
enjoy: Do as zombie. told you to. Has potential.