18:56, 1st Sep 2009
oh_snap: It doesn't look like lightning, but just streaks of blue. Try to get an effect similar to this by using further highlights and greater contrast between the background and the lightning: http://www.lifeclever.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/01/lightning.jpg

14th Sept 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, rejected until updated.

Well, the electricity looks kinda watery, you might want to make them more shiney or something.

This is pretty good