14:44, 5th Jul 2009
zombie2279: I don't get it. You started off with a somewhat acceptable drawing (though the details would have been lost in the process), then you ruined everything with the blur. Why?

The icon itself wouldn't be bad, but details are missing from the dragon's head. Add more, clearer and more visible proportions and use color variations to give room for shading. Also, remove the funky, white borders from the head, it's really distortive.

8:40, 10th Jul 2009
zombie2279: Rejected until updated.

Looks nice!!! Do you have any wips?

Pretty nice, but there is more dragon, less breath.

don't want to sound sceptical, but a WIP would be nice... looks too much like CnP...

looks Epic!and oh yeah
krisserz is right.
try putting more fire. .just make the mouth maybe. .but still try putting the eyes back
4/5

I got wips for you gimme a sec...

btw what's a CnP?

I think that's enough :/

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Originally Posted by krisserz View Post
Pretty nice, but there is more dragon, less breath.
i can move the dragon back and put in more breath for a specific icon if you like :

btw what's a CnP?

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Copy and Paste

BTW don`t multipost. Use Button.

And Hide WIPs ([ hidden][/hidden])

krisserz said:

Copy and Paste

BTW don`t multipost. Use

Button.

And Hide WIPs ([ hidden][/hidden])

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sozz >.< i didnt upload upload wips b4 how do i hide again it aint working

Ahh I forgot. You can use [ hidden=TITLE][/hidden]

krisserz said:

Ahh I forgot. You can use [ hidden=TITLE][/hidden]

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title? i do not understand err do i have to do each picture??

GJ, its pretty good!!!

1) Dudes, please quit the Offtopic.

2) Blurring the dragon to fill the shape is a bad idea.

Paladon said:

1) Dudes, please quit the Offtopic.

2) Blurring the dragon to fill the shape is a bad idea.

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what do i do then?

Somehow, don't ask me why you did this, you only used black/grey colours for the dragon, blurring it and giving it partial transparency in order to colour the dragon by the background.

Instead, you should colour the dragon directly, avoid blurring own icons, use pencil tool, place shadings, blabla.
The usual.

Six posts of total nonsense deleted. Use the comments according to purpose please.

The Wip is awesome indeed. But... the white glowing inside the dragon fucks up all the icon. Try to delete it somehow, and add skin cells to the dragon with good highlightning, right now He is not seen as a dragon but a mouse.

Try replacing that strong shading with some dark red light. Could look better.

And try making that breath more fiery.