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zombie2279: Obviously rather lacking from all perspectives. The asteroid needs to be given way more work, it looks rather empty as it is. As said below, give it some more craters, some rocky parts on it, altogether give it a much more rocky shape. As soon as you're done, carry forward with detailing the flames. The effect doesn't look realistic at all. Give it some more colors, some more shading and and more variation to achieve a better look. Also, make the edges more flame-like.
Rejected until updated.
20:26, 28th Jun 2009
zombie2279: The asteroid looks like some sort of black stone now, even worse than before. The effect itself is becoming okay-like, but I failed to detect any more color schemes.
13:25, 30th Jun 2009
zombie2279: Rejected until updated.