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10:00, 25th Sep 2009
oh_snap: The whole thing is blurry. Everything really needs to have more definition. The bell needs a definite shape, in contrast to the background. The background looks like a mess of scribbles, and should either be more simplistic, or make the background so that you can tell what it is. As suggested in the comments, use a picture as a reference. Rejected until updated.
oh_snap: The whole thing is blurry. Everything really needs to have more definition. The bell needs a definite shape, in contrast to the background. The background looks like a mess of scribbles, and should either be more simplistic, or make the background so that you can tell what it is. As suggested in the comments, use a picture as a reference. Rejected until updated.