Windrunner29 said:
...done what Sin'dorei300 said.
Sorry, but i'm afraid u don't.
It isn't better than the old one.
Look at those fingers, do they look like arakkoa fingers?
I gave u some examples.
And, about the colors - i said they are oversaturated. It seems like u used pure yellow and then aplied burn/dodge tools for shadows/highlights.
The effect is a white blob now. Where are the details?
So, the fingers should resemble bird-like ones. Bird fingers have a lot of details, observe some to see.
I don't say to make them like real ones, but, at least, to have an idea about shapes, colors, proportions.
Also, observe feathers and claws.
The color variation is poor, especialy on that effect.
U barely have two-three variations for each color.
This means that the shading is poor aswell, not only coz it's missing/lacking, but also, coz we can't shade properly with only few color values.
I can't dictate u what to do step by step, u have to learn urself, i'm not a teacher.
If u're not interested u'll never learn.
Read some 2D art tutorials and practice. Without practice and observation nothing good will come out of it.
If i was harsh, please excuse me, but i said these things several times and i saw no results.
Btw, what art program did u use?