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I added a Map Overview. This is my first map, so it isnt good^^
But it would be nice if you give me Tips.

Hey i havent tried the map but i took a look at the overview.
1. Extra gold mines isnt needed in 1vs1 maps but its fine.
2. Taverns isnt used in 1vs1 maps. Mostly because those maps is short.
3. The neutral creeps and buildings isnt fair placed. Its better to be blue than red.
4. You could add more terrain variation at the right side. Its fine in left side.
5. Adding doodads is a good way to make the map more interesting.
6. Use heights to make the terrain better. Flat terrain is boring, but dont overuse.

Hope you can use this to improve your maps in the future. Keep up the good work and remember what i said!

~x-omg-x

X-OMG-X said:

Hey i havent tried the map but i took a look at the overview.
1. Extra gold mines isnt needed in 1vs1 maps but its fine.
2. Taverns isnt used in 1vs1 maps. Mostly because those maps is short.
3. The neutral creeps and buildings isnt fair placed. Its better to be blue than red.
4. You could add more terrain variation at the right side. Its fine in left side.
5. Adding doodads is a good way to make the map more interesting.
6. Use heights to make the terrain better. Flat terrain is boring, but dont overuse.

Hope you can use this to improve your maps in the future. Keep up the good work and remember what i said!

~x-omg-x

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Very wrong...

- A good 1on1 map MUST!!! have an expansion...at least 1 for each player.

- Why for hell no Taverns? Are you joking? Its a "must be" in every 1on1 map.

I'm rejecting this not because it doesn't have a Tavern, but because it uses neutral heroes as Gold Mine protectors. The acquisition range is insane and the terrain is too small; you can barely move without being attacked by the creeps.