Zul'Farrak

[Moderator]

17:09, 19th Jul 2009
ap0calypse: Rejected

Check posts #2, #4 and #7 for more information.

 

[Septimus]

1) Poor scripting with memory leak and does not contain proper victory/defeat.
2) For RPG genre, the terrain was very poorly develop as it lack of tiles variation and destructible/doodad.
3) Missing hotkey, poor tooltips and only can have 1 hero.

1/5 (Unacceptable)

Please do more research and read tutorial, the quality of the map was way too weak.

 

[krisserz]

Invalid author name, and other in-game things, how Septimus said. Vote for rejection.

 

[ap0calypse]

pleas write commands because its my first map and give me tips what can I do better the next time..

Allright, I'll write a command: Do not upload poor quality maps on the hive!
(You probably meant "comments" )

Well, you need to do everything better... the triggering, the terraining, the general idea, the objects, the description... everything.

Septimus (the one who wrote the first comment) has made some nice tutorials about triggering, it will make it a lot easier and your triggers won't cause lag (at the moment, they do).

You should check some other maps for the terrain, see how they've done it, use doodads, tileset variation, instead of blizzard cliffs, you can increase the terrain height and use pathing blockers, things like that.

For the objects: create custom spells (triggered), make the description a lot better, customize the units instead of copy/pasting standard units and changing the name!
Items are also very important in RPG-maps, create a lot of custom items, maybe use an item-system (bag, item-type, equipment-system, whatever you want, there are enough on the hive).

Check my signature to improve the description and 1 more thing: work on your English!

That's it, a lot of fun mapping, try to improve your skills for a while and then you can start creating a map.

 

[Beronin]

yeah youre right you have to learn way more

 

[Logitech]

i myself made a Zul'farrak map of course it failed -_- but at least i got all or most of the unit types and boss names i mean your Sandfury Executioner was named master of prisoners and all the trash mobs were forest trolls... you can look at mine at epicwar.com

 

[Ironside]

Vote for Rejection

Map Name: Zul'Farrak
Author: Unknown

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Description, Author, Map Name:
The Author is unknown , Map Name is ok, the description could be better. 5/10
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Terrain:
The Terrain is bad. It is almoust empty in most places. 2/10
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Triggers:
The triggers are ok , i didn't find any bugs in them. But you didn't include a quest menu and any hints and messages. 4/10
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Gameplay:
I started the game, gues what? i didn't have the population limit to buy a hero, then you didn't remove detonate and the buildings from wisps.
Wich means that the map is unplayable for now. 0/10
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Imported Material:
None imported material
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Your case maximum score is 40.

0%-49% = 1/5 vote for rejection
50%-60% = 2/5 but i vote for reviewed
61%-70% = 2/5 but i vote for Aproval
71%-80% = 3/5 vote for aproval
81%-92% = 4/5 vote for aproval
93%-100% = 5/5 vote for aproval
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Total: 11/40 = 13.7/50 == 27.4%/100%