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Hell_Master;2421803 said:
Map Reviewer: Hell_Master
Map Name: WarofGods
Map Author: GodFailure
Originality
The idea you are trying to show through this Campaign is really great and also having an
anime-based campaign looks unique for we only see anime campaigns sometimes and it is good to have a new one in list
but what ruined your idea here is that no story is being told here which pretty much crushed the overall idea of making a
campaign here because Campaign always does contains a story.
Also, most of the contents here such as one part is Sephiroth's spellset which pretty much copied some DotA spells
instead of following just the original spellset of Sephiroth deducted much of your points here
Score: 21/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!
Presentation
The way the map is being presented looks decent and tells us the necessary information
needed to be gathered by the audience included with Screenshots, Features, Credits (though I don't like the way you
credited yourself and yet you didnt credited those others that you have used resources with if incase there is which
pretty much dropped my rating below average or neutral which is 50/100.), and lastly Changelog which Descriptions
should never miss. Though I could suggest that instead of using Templates for Descriptions I suggest learn to use BB Codes
and maybe you could experiment more Templates only discovered by you.
Score: 26/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!
Design
DISBTN for Sephiroth is broken or is not displaying properly. Also most of the spells are not
really original and you could have much followed the spellset of Sephiroth which is much better. Lastly, could really used
some more details on what to do and where to go because seriously..... you start with a campaign without even a single
line of text explaining anything either to the story or the objective. You need to be creative here to be honest.
Score: 18/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!
Terrain
Terrain looks good at least here. Though could use some more raised grounds and lowered
ones for it is really flat which we should not expect when viewing a real view of a terrain. Could also use some more
variations at tiles and realisticness at scaling of decorations or doodads. But overall, terrain is good to go and is indeed
acceptable.
Score: 59/100
Triggers
Cant pretty much say if triggers are looking good or full of flaws for you protected the maps
inside this Campaign which makes me unable to open the map and see through the triggers but by looking how you done
those custom spells including those DotA based (if incase its yours also), I must say you did a good job.
Score: 63/100
Object Data
Model for Sephiroth as stated by Daffa is ripped. You should totally link where you got the
model or at least state for its sake. Great Deduction here... below average due to not crediting or even stating where
you got the model or what site and its in the rules and you broke them.
NO story being told here which pretty much make it weird for the campaign which also deducts some points.
Score: 4/100
Gameplay
Gameplay looks much boring for its too straight. Just killing mobs and bosses with no proper
resaon why... Is it for a story that Sephiroth needed to fight that? BY fighting that boss will it make Sephiroth stronger?
No nothing, no explanation and just simply fighting. Just from here, rating will be realy below average or neutral score.
Score: 9/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!
I suggest you to formulate a proper story into this for it is really needed for a campaign,
fix the broken icons and credits those you didnt.
Final Score: 28.571/100
1/5 Vote for Rejection
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