VillagerMale1.BLP

[Moderator]

10:11, 29th Dec 2009
CloudWolf: This skin definately needs some work before it can be approved. The shirt and trousers need far more shading around the edges and under the armpits. Right now it looks like hes got solid green skin I'd suggest attempting to make some folds in the clothing like a real Tshirt has if you can Same for the trousers.

I'd also suggest making some sort of belt between the tshirt and the trousers, because they seem to merge into one another as it is :S

Finally, you will need to do some more freehand work on the skin. Skins must be 75% freehand. Right now, its probably less than 50%. Perhaps you could make your own hair for the skin?

Overall, you just need to make the colour less "solid". Its a good start though and I'll give you the chance to improve it

 

[Whisper]

lol
nice painthand
man
:S
make some more details/shadows/highlights
be more creative :S

 

[Scythy Dervish]

thats u? youre very ..... green i think ^^

but i think it's a nice skin and can be useful, for a villager in green clothes maybe ^^

 

[Misha]

You sir, need a new face, a lot of definition, a lot of shadows and a lot of highlights. not to mention a different model

 

[Kuhneghetz]

He's got booger under his nose.

Hair is blurry and the clothes could use some major shading and definition.

 

[antihero]

First off, take a new screenshot without all the crap in it. We want to see how the texture looks on the model not a bunch of peace signs. Set it to daylight too.

What program did you use, cause if you're using any sort of program with an eyedropper, there should be no problem with getting the front and back to be the same color.
Right now it's boring and dull. If you want it to be approved, you're going to need to add a lot of details.

Overall its pretty bad. Start a new skin with a better theme, use some tutorials and references.

 

[Evillizard]

1; Tutorials fail for me. I dunno, I just don't follow them, they lost me at "TUTORIAL"
2; I tried doing this with priest, there was tons of things on the model that ruined it. I wanted to do a model without a beard, and even though I don't like this model, it was the only one that I could do
3; I know it's blurry, I'm always trying to stop that in my skins.
4; I'm not quite sure what I'm going to do with the face. I might kinda redo it or leave it how it is.
5; I will get a better screen shot. After I looked at the post I noticed the screen shot was hard to see.

 

[simkitty181]

I think this wouldn't be so bad if you added a slightly better texture to the clothing.
Used colors that arn't so...bold.
The blue on the pants is way too concentrated, use some colors that are a little more muted.
Lmao @ "Dan van Ohllus"

He's got booger under his nose.

I saw that too... Were you trying to add a green Hitler mustache? hehe
What program did you use to make the skin in?
Cause you might want to change programs, try gimp, or try photoshop or painshop pro.
I think it was mostly the color selection and lack of editing...
If you are using paint, I understand why that's the issue...
All I'm saying is, I've been at this stage once, you might want to try again.

 

[cookies4you]

very blurry. try to reduce blurriness and add some shadings. also, he needs a new face and a tissue.

 

[Evillizard]

the booger is ment to be green 5 Oclock sadow lol. I am using adobe photoshop ELEMENT 7.0. I will do some editting in the future, but I ment it to look cartoony as it is.

 

[Misha]

the booger is ment to be green 5 Oclock sadow lol. I am using adobe photoshop ELEMENT 7.0. I will do some editting in the future, but I ment it to look cartoony as it is.

learn to texture properly and then try, dude :/

 

[Dentothor]

cartoony is no excuse whatsoever. this will not be approved unless SO much mmore details are put into this. solid colours are NOT GOOD!

 

[Evillizard]

I slept on it, and I'll change the color of hair to brown, and I'm going to remove the belt, and mabye some stuff to his face, but I'm keeping the green shirt.

EDIT: The peace sign is hard to see in the pic, but it's a bit more clear ingame.

 

[BishopOfDoom]

His forehead looks somewhat strange, maybe too hairy there?

 

[Misha]

it is till blurry. do not make it blurry >_<

here's a tip:
enlarge your frikin' skin, do all the details, and then shrink and sharpen.

C'mon man, that is easy

 

[Evillizard]

Actually bishop, I was afraid the hair would screw up, but It actually turned out better then I expected. Sorry misha, I'll sharpen it in the next update.

 

[Misha]

Actually bishop, I was afraid the hair would screw up, but It actually turned out better then I expected. Sorry misha, I'll sharpen it in the next update.

if you're afraid of a screwup you're afraid of skining :3

 

[Evillizard]

/facepalm no, I ment when I was first creating the skin.

 

[Panda]

I think it needs more texture on the clothes.

 

[BishopOfDoom]

Evillizard, use layers, you can just delete them if something goes wrong.

 

[Evillizard]

/facepalm no comment to bishop

 

[Misha]

/facepalm no comment to bishop

/facepalm to you for showing this...unfinished skin.

 

[Evillizard]

/cover's misha's face with palm

 

[Misha]

Thanks

 

[Evillizard]

Btw, Cloudwolf said that the hair was recolor or something, but it is freehand.

I am looking for 4-5 things to go with before i make another update. Right now I just got "Sharpen it" and other people are saying "needs more shading and stuff" but I need solid suggestions where to put things and whatnot.

 

[takakenji]

make the peace sign darker

 

[Evillizard]

I know...