I played your game, ace992 and here is my review:
Good sides:
- This is your first maps
- You have good idea
- While playing this game, there was huge fights with ladder & custom units
- Some models were very nice and you have putted good abilities, example the death knights have "Rise Skeleton" magic
Bad sides:
- Usually it is not wise to put cinematics to multi players map(especially in this kind of map) because then people don't like to play the game more than once(Well, I have some cinematics in my maps but I have tried to make then quick ass possible) so maybe you should make the cinematic little shorter
- The game is really confusing, but after you have played 10 min you start to understand this game, however some people are already left the game
- Some units does not cost any food
- Terrain is just a plain
- The ladder and custom units are not so good combined
- The game should be ladder units with massing or custom units with massing, not both
- There is no idea to put workers to gain gold & wood because you can have 5000 gold & wood every 1 minute
- You should re think about those "anti spam towers" or whatever they are
- Much more, I don't even remember!
Suggestions:
- First of all, I think you should make just couple of buildings to each player where you can create units. Building the base is useless at least in my opinion.
- Before the first cinematic you should put about 2 sec wait because there is always someone who lags at the beginning
- I also recommend you to remove every single starting unit. I think this game would be nice if you just have 1-2 buildings where you can buy/train units and they will automatically go to place where they fight. So the game is like... tower wars with ladder & custom units
Overall: The game have good idea you just need to improve it. Because this is your first map I will give you:
Very good 7/10
To the end I have to say that this map is very good for the beginner as you are. Good job. If you do more maps you will be master in one to two year! XD