To The Slaughter!

[Moderator]

11:24, 7th Jun 2013
Orcnet: here's my criticism:

-creep difficulty is unbearable, even though its a 4v4, early creep outs is impossible because of high leveled creeps, about the creeps the dragon turtle and the revenant is not that strong enough to be singled as a creep camp, the dragon creeps are way stronger than them and those two only has the half of its statistics, so I advice you give them few creeps tucked along.

-terrain needs more polishing, it looks very flat and monotone the based layout of yours only needs some decor enhancing, you can follow some ideas to this map: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps-564/ancient-warfield-234591/

-the waygates are useless, make some strategic explanation to that area right now it doesn't do anything, and the goblin shipyard has no creep guards

so overall you still need improvement, but the map link I showed in top of my comment can really help your ideas, for now rejected but you can vm/pm me when you update the map so I can turn it back to pending.

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

lol you reupload

 

[Lichkings slave]

lol you reupload

Nope its a updated one

 

[Lichkings slave]

hi there i will go ritgh to the point so it will be easy and fast

- the doors(waygates) in the water, that is part of the game play or doodad, it is a little confuse, maybe some more redefinition or a creeps there, i dont know it is your map,
- the center decorate, i dont like the column it doesnt fit, i would leave the broken horse,
-you put some doors and behind them, creeps, i like the iniciative but AI, they dont destroy gates, i recommend you to leave the gates and put the health to 0% so it will be destroyed, or put it open with trigger
-the grass terrain,where are placed the taverns, is much wild now than before, maybe you can do the same in the starting location in the same way, but nothing to ugly the building sites

IMPORTANT!!! there are 3 footmans at the north of the violet starting postion, i think you should remove it, i use units to test things like brigdes, but never forget removing

hope my comments help you to improve

Shoot! Ill get right to it thank you
EDIT - fixed the problems.

 

[Orcnet]

here's my criticism:

-creep difficulty is unbearable, even though its a 4v4, early creep outs is impossible because of high leveled creeps, about the creeps the dragon turtle and the revenant is not that strong enough to be singled as a creep camp, the dragon creeps are way stronger than them and those two only has the half of its statistics, so I advice you give them few creeps tucked along.

-terrain needs more polishing, it looks very flat and monotone the based layout of yours only needs some decor enhancing, you can follow some ideas to this map: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps-564/ancient-warfield-234591/

-the waygates are useless, make some strategic explanation to that area right now it doesn't do anything, and the goblin shipyard has no creep guards

so overall you still need improvement, but the map link I showed in top of my comment can really help your ideas, for now rejected but you can vm/pm me when you update the map so I can turn it back to pending.