The Last Samurai-TSOS v1.11

[Moderator]

12:28, 14th Jun 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Approved
Alpha tile used to create river and mirror effect is just perfect.
Story continue nicely as well.

 

[Vengeancekael]

Yay you've finally finished it!
I hope you fixed the soundtracks.

 

[xDeathKnightx]

Yeah, i did as much i possibly could with this, also remember that i have exams at the moment, so if it does seem a bit rushed, i apologize.

Is this going to get reviewed and approved/rejected?

 

[Vengeancekael]

There are currently around 400 pending maps, so it will probably take some time.

 

[xDeathKnightx]

Hmm... it's okay, i can wait. I just want it to show up with the rest of my maps. xD

 

[Orcnet]

finally! you made another episode! good job!
I was actually subscribing to every episode you made lol!

 

[xDeathKnightx]

Thanks!

Yey, i have a fan! XD

 

[Narogog]

you finished it impressive

 

[xDeathKnightx]

Thank you ;D

P.S. anyone who can re-view this map, it would be highly appreciated.

 

[Restor]

I just watched just like 5 first minutes but...


Well, the camera has many weak points, it moves creepy, and the terrain is nothing special also. So for the begining just like 2/5.

 

[xDeathKnightx]

Well I don't make maps any more, I am more occupied by training for the army.

 

[xDeathKnightx]

-Sorry for Double post.

I am continuing In map making at the moment. I will fix any errors people have spotted in this today.

 

[Vengeancekael]

okay i luk at cinimatic, it is good, nut as original as the last pantheon, but ok lol! 3/5 useful!

 

[xDeathKnightx]

LOL, Thanks Vengeancekael

 

[Vengeancekael]

Anyway, I'm gonna post a short review for realsies now, nothing too big, there are only a few things I need to point out, as for the rest, perfect, but you already know that
butt siriusly to de vagina, maek neuw lost partner partition.

 

[xDeathKnightx]

Lol, thanks
This time i didn't get that last part xD

 

[Vengeancekael]

Lez go:

• In the ending scene, when the camera is panning over the village, it goes a bit through a building and causes the building to disappear.
  
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• During the fight scene in the beginning, add more camera movement when the 2 are talking to each other (Musashi and Toshi), the camera is behind Musashi's back the whole time. Maybe show Toshi when he's talking and vice versa
  
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• You made a few mistakes: The "I" is always capitalized, even in a sentence like this "Yes, because I am the best."
• Also, there's a difference between "to" and "too": "to" is only for verbs, "to do something", for example "You are going to fight for me."
  "too" is like "also", "I too/also want to kill him".
• You spelled my name wrong:
  
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• This is just the silliest scene I've ever seen First Sharnae attacks Raiken and they both spam the same move for about 15s, namely they both blink to a different spot the whole time and slash once, then the other guys just jump on top of Raiken out of nowhere one after another and all of them get knocked down. Also where did the guy on the horse pop out from? The camera suddenly changes and you see him in front of Raiken. But the horseman's aerial move was cool, other than that maybe make Raiken's and Sharnae's combat scene a bit cooler and also make the entrance of the other guys better and less sillier
  
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• Same thing applies to the final combat scene, the minor characters (meaning not Sharnae, Raiken, Vago or Odin) do stupid moves, that just make them look stupid and unnecessary/uninteresting.
• The first scene in the castle where they've just come in after Odin, background music can be heard, namely environment sounds (birds, etc.) for about 5 seconds. Start the music earlier.

Do the above things and I'll discuss a higher rating with Kobas.
Also I must compliment you on the 2 scenes with the archway and the high building collapsing, amazing camera work there

 

[xDeathKnightx]

OMFG!??!?! I CAN'T BELIEVE I SPELT YOUR NAME WRONG, AND YOU STILL GIVE ME A 5/5????

Either way, i will fix those things. or try too, i don't know if you did, but if you try to trigger anything to do with a unit in that map, it laggs like there's no tomorrow...

Haha, also, that scene where they jumped.. i was actually going to do something else, but i couldn't, Editor wouldn't let me, I was going to make 2 of them run along the tall side walls and jump down, but when i tried, they'd sorta, just spaz along the wall, instead of running..

Anyway, Thank you again for your review. These help soo much. I will fix all this and upload the newer version tomorrow, seeing as it takes about 10-20minutes to upload, don't want to kill the internet now for my brothers.

 

[Vengeancekael]

Either way, i will fix those things. or try too, i don't know if you did, but if you try to trigger anything to do with a unit in that map, it laggs like there's no tomorrow...

I know that feeling xD Especially when making an RPG.

 

[DSanhueza]

Really good map, I liked the soundtrack and the models, they match pretty good! very good story and everything really good job man 5/5!

 

[xDeathKnightx]

Thanks

 

[Nolko]

Awesome ! How have you made the water please ?

 

[FireLord001]

Where did you get the models samurai models? Please reply fast

 

[FireLord001]

Nooo I'm watching all your episodes but i can't watch this because it's too big T_T

 

[xDeathKnightx]

I'm not really active here at all anymore, but The models were from Black_Stan, a legend in model making (Samurai and ninja type).

 

[SirGareth]

Amazing cinematic, the last part was definitely the best one! Thanks for creating and uploading this baby! 5/5 !

 

[deepstrasz]

-retarded soldier, couldn't even shoot a canon while a dialogue with two lines and a gunshot meant plenty of time
-right, now the guy that was fighting Vago on the green fields couldn't avoid a shinto sign falling on him?
-Julie wasn't used as bait at all...
-so nobody actually dies but the demoness!?
-angel wings but kills everybody

The mellodrama... my head really hurts.

2/5. Too bad for the camera shots and effects.

 

[Fro]

i can't watch it because its force closed while i open it