STORY:
Not a lot of story for a cinematic of this length, but had some interesting sides to it, such as the demon power part. I easily see some good potential here
3.5/5
TERRAIN:
Very nice all round, beautiful forest, nice shoreline, awesome interiors. Not much else to say, good work!
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4.5/5
CAMERA:
Not bad but could’ve been better, especially in the conversation scenes and the action scene. The camera just kind of slowly rotates around the point of interest from a distance, not many angle changes or faster movement. In conversations you can have different angles when showing dialogue from different characters, showing a front-on view of the char as they talk, rather than just an overhead shot for the whole conversation, makes it little boring. And in the action scenes needs some more close-ups and faster camera movements, again it just kind of moves slowly from a distance with an overhead view, which isn’t too immersive. Try to get in closer to the action and quicken things up a little. All in all, not bad but needs a little work for different scenes
3/5
ACTION:
Could get a bit repetitive at points, with a bit too much regular attacking combined with simply moving them to a different position. Maybe a few more spells, special effects etc. to liven things up. But apart from that the action was alright
3.5/5
MUSIC:
Choice of music was alright, but it didn’t suit some parts of the cinematic, such as when the guy is telling the different soldier groups where to go, it was a fairly low-key scene but there was this loud, heavy metal type music playing in the background haha which didn’t exactly suit the tone at that point. But the music itself was alright, just make sure to use it at the right time and right place
MODELS:
Models were very nice, the succubus especially hehe. Nice choice, they all looked great and suited the cinematic perfectly
There were a few random things too like the occasional typo, but all in all it was fine
Approved
