The Demon Stone

[Moderator]

12:28, 12th Jul 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[light bolt30]

Vote for Rejection:
-Doesn't seem completed.
-Poor description
-Poor terrain
-Boring Gameplay
-Poor quality
RATING: N/A REJECTION

 

[mckill2009]

Vote for Rejection:
-Doesn't seem completed.
-Poor description
-Poor terrain
-Boring Gameplay
-Poor quality
RATING: N/A REJECTION

sorry, i don't know JASS and i'm not so good in terraining, thanks anyway...

 

[Zenonoth]

I don't give a damn if this map has a preview image or description IF THE MAP IS GOOD ( That's how I think )

I liked the plot, it was really well made and was perfect. I liked how everything was arranged, still there were some problems:

1) There are a whole 10 minutes where you fight nothing but Satyrs which drop no items and give the least experience.
2) Terraining is bad, but as you said..you're not an expert terrainer so you should seek help from one to help you with the terraining.
3) Creeps that require to be cleared at the forest section don't drop a single item.

Things you should do.
1) Add some dropable items to the creeps if you can.
2) You could get help from some terrainer.
3) You could do many things such as: Improve Description / Add Screenshots / Import custom models / spells / icons / music to attract viewers ( OPTIONAL )
4) Improve the gameplay.

Rating this map 3/5 until updated.

 

[BlackKnightTGS]

You should use BB Codes to improve your description, it's more eye-catching

Anyway, I spotted some typos, and you should fix Daemus' selection scale. Not gonna say much more, since it looks like your other map, and basically the same things should be fixed and the same suggestions. You should also make creeps drop some items so it'd be more fun. But in terms of originality, it's great, 3/5

 

[mckill2009]

I don't give a damn if this map has a preview image or description IF THE MAP IS GOOD ( That's how I think )

I liked the plot, it was really well made and was perfect. I liked how everything was arranged, still there were some problems:

1) There are a whole 10 minutes where you fight nothing but Satyrs which drop no items and give the least experience.
2) Terraining is bad, but as you said..you're not an expert terrainer so you should seek help from one to help you with the terraining.
3) Creeps that require to be cleared at the forest section don't drop a single item.

Things you should do.
1) Add some dropable items to the creeps if you can.
2) You could get help from some terrainer.
3) You could do many things such as: Improve Description / Add Screenshots / Import custom models / spells / icons / music to attract viewers ( OPTIONAL )
4) Improve the gameplay.

Rating this map 3/5 until updated.

as, usual, mr Zenonoth, thank you very much for you comment, i will do what you said, i will update this as soon as i have time...

 

[mckill2009]

You should use BB Codes to improve your description, it's more eye-catching

Anyway, I spotted some typos, and you should fix Daemus' selection scale. Not gonna say much more, since it looks like your other map, and basically the same things should be fixed and the same suggestions. You should also make creeps drop some items so it'd be more fun. But in terms of originality, it's great, 3/5

thank you blacknight, i will do some changes/updates in the future...

 

[mckill2009]

my problem is, i am very poor in terraining because i have less time in doing so...