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The Cold River
- Author(s)
- DemonFace
- Tags
- Melee, Medieval / Warcraft
- Size
- 43.54 KB
- Rating
- Downloads
- 24
- Created
- Jan 24, 2014
- Updated
- Mar 13, 2014
- Resources
- 1
- State
Approved
This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
Another 1v1 map by me. Terrain might have some problems, because i made it in hurry. I got this map idea from a map called Borderlands.
This map has 6 green creep camps, 0 orange creep camps and 1 red creep camp.
A war has started in at the cold river. Who will finally rule this small island? Will it be you or your enemy?
Screenshot:
1. update:
Added more doodads and improved terrain a little bit.
Keywords:
meele, cold, river
This map has 6 green creep camps, 0 orange creep camps and 1 red creep camp.
A war has started in at the cold river. Who will finally rule this small island? Will it be you or your enemy?
Screenshot:
1. update:
Added more doodads and improved terrain a little bit.
Keywords:
meele, cold, river
Contents
Reviews
- Joined
- Nov 14, 2012
- Messages
- 154
Rating: 1/5
Good:
-It's Functional
-I like the concept.
Bad:
-Lacks a Map Description http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/miscellaneous-tutorials-456/map-description-templates-171659/
-Should have better terrain (I know you said you rushed it, I'm just sayin'
)
-Should use multiple trees
-Should have mixed up the tile, make it seem
like an actual rural plain covered in snow.
-Terrain is flat
Take your time on these small maps, It's not that much work constructing a regular melee map. You can do better!
Good:
-It's Functional
-I like the concept.
Bad:
-Lacks a Map Description http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/miscellaneous-tutorials-456/map-description-templates-171659/
-Should have better terrain (I know you said you rushed it, I'm just sayin'
)-Should use multiple trees
-Should have mixed up the tile, make it seem
like an actual rural plain covered in snow.
-Terrain is flat
Take your time on these small maps, It's not that much work constructing a regular melee map. You can do better!
- Joined
- Sep 6, 2013
- Messages
- 6,743
That already says all.
Nothing special, map looks very boring, lack of doodads, terrain can be improved a lot.
Next time, better take time you need before you upload a ressource.
I quote from map submission rules:
You can read it up in my signature.
- Joined
- Mar 29, 2011
- Messages
- 3,765
Read the tutorial in how to create a melee map. You lack many things here. The terrain is too dull. This will be rejected.
- Joined
- Nov 4, 2013
- Messages
- 2,017
Very cheap melee map! These are the reasons:-
- Too much flat terrain and the raisings you've done are not even smooth
- Badly used tile variation
- Lack of doodads
SUGGESTIONS:-
- Read a lot of tutorials about terraining
- You might consider posting your maps in the Map Development Section
- Next time, make a larger map because small maps tend to be boring
OVERALL RESULT:-
To conclude, this is a very poor melee map which can be done in a few minutes by anyone. I'm sorry, but I can't give this more than 1/5 and I am forced to vote for REJECTION!
- Too much flat terrain and the raisings you've done are not even smooth
- Badly used tile variation
- Lack of doodads
SUGGESTIONS:-
- Read a lot of tutorials about terraining
- You might consider posting your maps in the Map Development Section
- Next time, make a larger map because small maps tend to be boring
OVERALL RESULT:-
To conclude, this is a very poor melee map which can be done in a few minutes by anyone. I'm sorry, but I can't give this more than 1/5 and I am forced to vote for REJECTION!
- Joined
- Jul 31, 2010
- Messages
- 5,246
Too paced and symmetric melee design:
-Bridge is too near, means main player bases are very close to each other, early air unit raid can win the game.
-Player Blue's region has more space than Player Red, couldn't you just clone it?
-creep camps are so few, no neutral building except for expansions
For now it looks fine for practice, but not the real deal.
-Bridge is too near, means main player bases are very close to each other, early air unit raid can win the game.
-Player Blue's region has more space than Player Red, couldn't you just clone it?
-creep camps are so few, no neutral building except for expansions
For now it looks fine for practice, but not the real deal.
