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The battle of Races 3

Submitted by -Sh0ck3r-
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
This is a story for the races,and some angels,at this cinematic you can see battle of them.

Keywords:
Angels,Races,Light,Darkness,
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The battle of Races 3 (Map)

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18:13, 25th Mar 2009 by bounty hunter2: The Mini Mods are clear on this, please don't allow yourself to submit such low quality work here, Rejected.
  1. 18:13, 25th Mar 2009 by bounty hunter2:
    The Mini Mods are clear on this, please don't allow yourself to submit such low quality work here, Rejected.
     
  2. -Sh0ck3r-

    -Sh0ck3r-

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    by -Sh0ck3r-,pls download,watch and comment :p.
     
  3. Septimus

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    With such a terrible description and invalid author name, do you think you would encourage user to download it?

    How many times did I need to tell you about it?

    From what I seen, it look like you never read the tutorial properly.
     
  4. deathreaven

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    You know what? I don't even feel like saying what's wrong with it. You know exactly why this isn't acceptable -Sh0k3r-
     
  5. -Sh0ck3r-

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    Septimus how can I learn to create really maps?
     
  6. thedeathunterxx

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    lol this is funny.


    1/5
     
  7. ModelTester

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    Hilarious!
     
  8. zapleaf

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    I have been making maps off and on as a hobby for about 6 years now and i myself am not that greta at making maps. But what i suggest (which is what i did a lot) is to start off making tower defence maps. Make a simple lane for units to walk though and land for peope to make towers on. Add tower upgrading and some simple things. After you make a few and you think your betting work your way up making and adding new ideas you come up with to the maps. One day you can start making great maps but for now your pushing your skills past what then can be pushed to.

    Map [No Rating]
     
  9. -Sh0ck3r-

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    but i make maps 3 years and they are not great ...i will add some ideas.
     
  10. Septimus

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    No offense. But in this case, it was terrible. I start mapping at year 2003 or 4 (Cannot remember) as a hobby and never release my work cause it was for fun. Infact, I probably make only about 2 maps at that time.

    At year 2006, I start mapping again and yet the same. Make 1 map for fun again and the quality was poor, but never release it cause it was for my own desire.

    February year 2008, I decided to make a really good playable map to be release at the public. Start reading tutorial and find whatever way it was necessary to make a good work and now I am at least capable to make a decent map.

    It your case, you have been making map for about 3 years. Why your map making standard still remain at poor?

    1) You never do research
    2) You never read tutorial. Even if you do, I doubt you have ever try to understand it.
    3) You keep on expect somebody to do it for you.

    If you hate to keep on receive a negative comment about your map, it was time for you to shape up your work.

    Not trying to brag or whatever it was. The truth is, I want to point out that you did not take any action to improve yourself.
     
    Last edited: May 4, 2009
  11. jadegolem

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  12. Zelda.Alex

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    >>Place some description at the place where I choose map in the game.
    >>You need to vary tiles. You had used only one kind of tile. Also you need to vary height of the terrain, introduce doodads, add wildlife etc.
    >>There were many spelling mistakes.
    >>When the army of the blademaster comes the camera angle is too bad.
    >>Try to scale trees. It makes the scene look better. Also try to place them at random.
    >>When the first demon says that only his brother can kill him & after that his brother comes it is too much predictable.
    >>Adding a story would have been better.


    You need to read tutorials & try to get feedback in cinematic before you submit a cinematic.
     
  13. -Sh0ck3r-

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    Thanks Zelda.Alex ;), i am great fan at Cinematic maps.