The 5:th Orc Squad

[Moderator]

23:29, 3rd Aug 2008
Septimus:

Use the link to view the review.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/768141-post2.html

Although this map quality is poor due to the terrain, it is not too horrible till had to be rejected. Thus, it is approve.

 

[Septimus]

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[√] - Give credit to the original author.

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[√] - I do not even know what for you use model as your loading screen. The whole loading screen is blank.
[√] - I do not even know what for you develop the map terrain 100% complete if the cinematic camera just view 30% of the entire map.
[√] - Amazing, the sniper can jump down from the building without getting killed.

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[√] - Extremely dull terrain, only 1 type of structure ? Add variety of structure for it.
[√] - Unprofessional way of setting starting location.
[√] - Major bug detected, only player 1 would end the game automatically. The rest of the player had to manually quit.

Score - 30/100
Rating - 2/5
Condition - Moderate
Status - Approve
Review - 1

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[SSgt. Konsai]

Hmm it's okay, but i think it's too short.
The loading screen is totally blank, you should put a picture or sth else in.
And i wonder why the cinematic just shows 30 % of the map

It's a nice story, but only 3 orcs were attacking 4 marines ...
It's okay, but...you should see what you could do better.

There is a thing i like: The Dialogue between the figures, it makes it more realistic.

 

[Fratelli Guy]

Looks to me like a smaller Loap with different terrain

 

[Preskooldude]

Doesn't look like much from the preview...