Statue of Azshara

[.Ragnaros]

Statue of Azshara
By .Ragnaros || TSO Studios



NOTE: This is my first terrain submission...

I hope you like it, looking for quality criticism!

 

[Oziris]

Looks good for the first time!
1. Remove the rocks behind the statue. They look ugly.
2. Make a fog and set time to night, only then will the raise of light look good.
3. The two shrub combination you used is ugly. I suggest deleting all of them and adding other shrubs (don't know the names but there are much good shrubs in the UTM)
4. Make a better tiles ( Ground ). Grass doesn't grow in water, does it?

Good luck.

 

[.Ragnaros]

It was made in 20 minutes so I didn't look to all small things that may change the appearance, thanks!

I'll update the terrain when I've time

 

[Revolve]

Well uhhhh.... That statue isn't a Statue of Azhara >.> lol

Looks okay, but the Light from Above doodad, try making it's size bigger and it's color darker. Will make it more natural.

 

[Belgarath]

I'd try using mainly grass tufts, with a bit of a lowered Z scale. The bright green HT grasses don't fit. Also.. Azshara statue is a different one - the one with the lady thing. I've never liked those trees, I think you could use better ones. The light should fully encompass the statue, the half-archway looks a bit out of place: try tinting it according to the area. The bridge, IMO, should be a natural one, or the wooden plank one with a bit of green in the tint. The sky ATM is fine, but could be worked on. Try using some different rocks though, the sunken ruins green variations are wonderful for these types of terrains.
As for tiling, I'd use more dirty grass and lumpy grass, with some leaves around the trees and grass around less overgrown areas.

And Oziris, er, yeah, underwater is a massive barren wasteland... cough.

 

[Oziris]

With sand, yes. Depends sometime. I for once never saw ground underwater that grows grass out of it. But if you seen it, fine with me.

 

[PsychoNerdial]

Luv it

 

[.Ragnaros]

Revolve, that statue is of Azshara, as it says in the statue's name xD (UTM)

Belgarath, I see your point and you're right I guess, I'll fix it soon, on the week end (school - Damn...)

 

[Arcany]

Well uhhhh.... That statue isn't a Statue of Azhara >.> lol

Got any kind of pics/footage to prove this...?
It's just a name. You can take the statue of any generic character and call it anything.

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Terrain looking good so far, I like the background. The grass on the bottom of the lake is a bit '' meh '' though.