Snowy Forests v1.0

[Moderator]

Orcnet

12:15, 15th Nov 2013

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Snowy Forests (Tested Version 1.0) Rate Score Percent Letter 5/5 91-100 A Rate Score Percent Letter 4/5 81-90% B Rate Score Percent Letter 3/5 75-80% C Rate Score Percent Letter 2/5 70-74% D Rate Score Percent Letter 1/5 50-69% F Overview: Gameplay "I had a similar like these before when I was just a kid, I never knew such idea will spread on someone's mind for some time, its cool and very well on track with realism, although the trees are too heavily textured you can't see the enemies below even from bird's eye view, I suggest you look out for a tree with less grass and so for a better view." Terrain "Terrain is good looking, but what I've said about the trees, it makes it hard to see who's hiding under neath it." Management "Overall map can be useful." Total Score: (Gameplay[x/5] + Terrain[x/5] + Management[x/5] / Total Score[15] * 50 + 50) Rate Score Percent Letter 9/15 80% C

 

[Legal_Ease]

Hey, this looks really nice. I am a big fan of snow. But, you need a proper description to be approved. Check the Map Submission Rules. You can do it using simple BBcode key and making catagories like "Story", "Screenshots", "Features" and so on. You might list all of the neutral buildings you used. If you want to save some time you might try using one of these Map Discription Templates. Also, I really like this simple yet useful Beginner's Guide to Map Making and Text Colors and this Advanced Terraining. There is no rule that Melee can't have new text colors or other tweaks. It can even have a Map Preview Screen.Your melee map can even have a multi-board (to list gold or kills, etc) or restart options added without losing its melee category quality. If you want to learn any of this here's a great place to start - Things GUI users should know. Finally, you should always try Polishing Your Game, to make sure it really shines. That last one also has a section on making a description. Good Luck!!! +rep!

Note: Player 3 (Teal) has an unfair advantage being so close to the expansion.

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

Listen to Legal Ease, he has everything there you need about map submitting. If you don't take his advice, this map will be taken down no matter the quality. Taken down = rejection.

+rep to both

 

[Grole]

hy thank you four comments an telling me what do i need to do but i dont understand
i mean i dont know how to do all of those things

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

You need a better description to allow the map to be 'public' or 'permanent'

If you click what Legal posted, it should help. Press the update button on the top right to update your map.

 

[Grole]

Thank you i will update the map and i will set bether description

 

[Legal_Ease]

Button Top-right hand corner. [edit] Oh, I see you got it! Nice! Now spice it up a bit.

Here is another tip. Use a private message or a visitor message to use the bbcode tools. I don't know why the Hive has not added this feature to the map descriptions (we really could use it). So, create the description in a private message and click the "go advanced" button. Then you can work on a description and check it by clicking the "preview message" button. This will let you use the tools like "add image" "color" "font" hidden" and so on. When you are done copy the bbcode you have and paste it into your description. Then save changes and boom sweet description. Here is an example for you.

example Overview Snowy Forests v1.0 its an ALTERED melee map set in the arctic, somewhere north of Lordaeron. Game play is the same as melee except that here are a few tweeks. The map is meant to feel more realistic and has an exciting over-powered unit for each race at level 3. Features -Tree/Destructibles the Snowy tree Wall ts bigger than normal size and have more hp so it looks like real forest and adding some Northrend Tree Wall in forests in forests you can see wolfs Trols . . . and adding some Snow Tree Wall (Dead) in Forests like it was bean cutting from some one long time ago -Environment The Rocks are bigger than normal Rocks so it looks very cool in forests River Rushes are bigger and little darker than normal River Rushes it looks very Cool on water Lily Pad its little biger than normal Lily Pad . . . Cattail its bigger to -In the Tileset Northrend Snow (Light) -Players on players i was working the most i was making the Buildings little bigger so its look Cooler and i was adding to Humans,Night Elf,Orcs,Undead the Titan i love it to call titan - the titan its a giant warrior players get at tier 3! -The humans have War Golem = Titan -The Undead have Flesh Golem = Titan -The Orcs have Stonemaul Warchief = Titan -The Night Elf has Stone Golem = Titan (it have an texture --> Tree Golem) Screenshots ***add here using tags. [COLOR="MediumTurquoise"][size=3][center][B]Changelog[/B][/center][/size][/COLOR] [color="white"]Version 1.0 [/COLOR][/box][/table][/hidden][/stable] [stable][hidden=plain code example][plain][table][box="Snowy Forest v1.0"][COLOR="MediumTurquoise"][size=3][center][B]Overview[/B][/center][/size][/COLOR] [COLOR="white"]Snowy Forests v1.0 its an ALTERED melee map set in the arctic, somewhere north of Lordaeron. Game play is the same as melee except that here are a few tweeks. The map is meant to feel more realistic and has an exciting over-powered unit for each race at level 3.[/COLOR] [COLOR="MediumTurquoise"][size=3][center][B]Features[/B][/center][/size][/COLOR] [COLOR="YellowGreen"]-Tree/Destructibles[/COLOR][color="white"] the Snowy tree Wall ts bigger than normal size and have more hp so it looks like real forest and adding some Northrend Tree Wall in forests in forests you can see wolfs Trols . . . and adding some Snow Tree Wall (Dead) in Forests like it was bean cutting from some one long time ago :D [COLOR="PaleTurquoise"]-Environment[/COLOR] The Rocks are bigger than normal Rocks so it looks very cool in forests River Rushes are bigger and little darker than normal River Rushes it looks very Cool on water Lily Pad its little biger than normal Lily Pad . . . Cattail its bigger to [COLOR="MediumTurquoise"]-In the Tileset[/COLOR] Northrend Snow (Light) [COLOR="red"]-Players[/COLOR] on players i was working the most i was making the Buildings little bigger so its look Cooler and i was adding to Humans,Night Elf,Orcs,Undead the Titan i love it to call titan - the titan its a giant warrior players get at tier 3! [COLOR="RoyalBlue"]-The humans have War Golem[/COLOR] = Titan [COLOR="grey"]-The Undead have Flesh Golem[/COLOR] = Titan [COLOR="SeaGreen"]-The Orcs have Stonemaul Warchief[/COLOR] = Titan [COLOR="DarkOrchid"]-The Night Elf has Stone Golem[/COLOR] = Titan (it have an texture --> Tree Golem)[/COLOR] [COLOR="MediumTurquoise"][size=3][center][B]Screenshots[/B][/center][/size][/COLOR] ***add here using [img] tags. [COLOR="MediumTurquoise"][size=3][center][B]Changelog[/B][/center][/size][/COLOR] [color="white"]Version 1.0 [/COLOR][/box][/table][/plain][/hidden][/stable] Feel free to copy and paste this code into your description but please add screenshots if you do. Also, note: This map is [COLOR="Red"]Altered Melee[/COLOR] if it has new units in it.

 

[Binsu]

Hello there, I mus agree with a Rejection of this or maybe Pending because of the reasons that this should be an altered Melee Map meaning that a melee was edited in form of edited units, buildings, items and such of the original melee. Now, that this is a Altered Melee map, still there should be a considerable or fine amount of changes to be considered one of an ALtered Melee and I can see, it is quite a fine amount though they must also be good enough and can change the game quite alot and yours seems not yet at that level.

Dont rush on making stuffs and learn first, as what abgm, a user says here always and I must agree he is 100% right! Go look at the tutorials that Legal linked to you and better go to the Tutorial Sections of the Hive and read tutorials that bets fits you to improve your map! Good luck and still +4 REP!

 

[Grole]

hy thank you four telling me what do i need to do next but
i think its litle complicate

i think i found those tools

OMG this its soo Cool thank you alot four help me and explain to me what do i need to do its soo nice how can i change the picuter of the map i have one nice picture

How can i add screenshots
i wan to add some screenshot's from map

 

[Legal_Ease]

HOW TO ADD A SCREENSHOT TO YOUR MAP DESCRIPTION !!! 1. Open the map. This works in game or in world editor so you can do both. 2. Find angles you like. (in world editor you can scroll way out and then press and then keep scrolling - this will roll back the shadow and let you view the entire map from a distance. This looks really nice and shows the full map in more detail). Full Terrain View 3. Press & Control + "Print Screen" at the same time. This will save a screenshot to your clipboard. 4. Open Paint. 5. Click paste. or press control + "V" & at the same time. Now you should have a screenshot in Paint. If its a World Editor screenshot, crop the edges to remove the white user interface. 6. Save file as a .jpg or .png. Then go to add album and create an album. The click and select the image file you just saved. 7. Now your description and add these BBcode tags before and after the image URL. [img] Image URL Here .jpg [/img] To get the image URL view the picture in you web browser and right-click on it. Then choose Copy Image Address (sometimes called copy image URL) Image of Right-Click Drop-Down Menu This will copy the image URL to your clip board and the you can paste it between the BBcode tags. [SIZE="3"]8.[/SIZE] Save the description and view your new screenshot! Also consider using [hidden=hidden tags][plain][hidden=hidden tags] Screenshot here [/hidden][/plain][/hidden][/B][/COLOR][/box][/table]

 

[Grole]

where can i find Add Album ? do i need an program or something ? i mean do i need PowerPoint or something like that ? Thanks )

 

[Legal_Ease]

where can i find Add Album ? do i need an program or something ? i mean do i need PowerPoint or something like that ? Thanks )

No, your album is on the right on your profile page here at the hiveworkshop.com.

You only need Paint. Almost every computer comes with this program.

Paint

Map Preview Screen = This is how you can make a preview screen for the map. It will cover the preview you have up above. I recommend you learn screenshots first though.

Warning: As Hell_Master noted, this map needs to be ALTERED MELEE. You can change this in the update page. Changing this will not hurt anything, but leaving it as melee will get you rejected.

btw: Nice description!

 

[Grole]

i have found add album now what do i need to write in title or description ( its write BB code not allowed )
i have uploaded photos

what do i need to change from Melee map to

i have found i was changing the Melee to Altered Melee

Thank you four showying me and explayn to me how to do all of those things )
i was learning alot of things )

 

[Legal_Ease]

Nice now try adding the hidden tags to keep the description a reasonable size.

[hidden=like this] hidden stuff in here [/hidden]

like this

hidden stuff in here

 

[Grole]

i was tryng to put [/hidden] or

but i dont know how to set that on maps so it will be hidden maps i dont know how

i did it ty

 

[Legal_Ease]

i was tryng to put [/hidden] or

but i dont know how to set that on maps so it will be hidden maps i dont know how

i did it ty

Wow, you did everything! I think its time people take a second look at this.

Nice work!

 

[Grole]

Thanks

 

[Orcnet]

Map approved, see moderator comment on top.