Silent Forest

[Megafyr]

Yup, spent some more time with the editor. I really like this terrain. It's a dark forest with a brook. Hope you like it too.

 

[Naze]

Dude, what a potential you've got!

The placement is very good, the fog use is very pro too, the way the things fade away, the tile variation... yay. + rep.

Now, time for the critcism:

1. The water in the foreground is wierd. You can't actually see the water, and we can see the edge of the water model. Check the hidden picture:

lolwat

2. The sun rays that come through the leaves are a very sexy touch. But they are in a line., they all seem to have the same distance from the camera. Next time, spam very tiny regions randomly through the map, few close to the camera, few far from it, but never in a line, like it looks like in your terrain.

Well, that's it, keep terraing!

 

[Megafyr]

Dude, what a potential you've got!

The placement is very good, the fog use is very pro too, the way the things fade away, the tile variation... yay. + rep.

Now, time for the critcism:

1. The water in the foreground is wierd. You can't actually see the water, and we can see the edge of the water model. Check the hidden picture:

lolwat

2. The sun rays that come through the leaves are a very sexy touch. But they are in a line., they all seem to have the same distance from the camera. Next time, spam very tiny regions randomly through the map, few close to the camera, few far from it, but never in a line, like it looks like in your terrain.

Well, that's it, keep terraing!

Thanks for the comment, it was really useful! I'll make sure those things don't hurt your eyes next time.

 

[~Void~]

I love the angle you use but try using a few different ones. I've learned from experience that it gets boring after a while if you make terrains with the same camera angle every time.

 

[raid1000]

awesome!
cookie!

 

[bounty hunter2]

Very nice, the hill is a big plus to you. The fog is excelent, however the sun rays should be added with a custom model I think.