Short Lyric

[shadow3]

I'm a songwriter, and I thought I'd share this with you guys, maybe you like it.
It's just the text, and not a finished song, and probably won't be either, as I'm not in a band anymore.


The Zero Sense

Welcome to my world it's a bright day
Enjoy your stay and set me out
Out in the line of the sick and derailed
I come into pieces and deliver the show

I fear the great apocalyptic race
In dust I shall return again
Mind breaks down upon a needle
I don't want to lose - myself

 

[arafor]

From the way I made it sound in my head it sounded good XD and I think it is good. I think you should try making this a song. Well done keep writing.

 

[NinjasDontFight]

I could only get like 4 lines total to rhyrm in my head. :/


It dosen't make much sense to me, but what the hell +rep!

 

[shadow3]

Like I said, not a finished song, and my style of singing doesn't require that much rhyme.