Shock Charge

[Moderator]

12th Dec 2015
IcemanBo: For long time as NeedsFix. Rejected.

Bribe:

It's not MUI nor leakless.

Jmove_point never gets removed. Jcaster_point never gets removed. Jtarget_point never gets removed.

When you do: Set Jcaster = (Triggering unit), you should from that point on reference only Jcaster, not (Triggering unit). This will make the code run more quickly in-game.

This needs some amount of attention to make it better.

 

[Archangel678]

Post trigger, more description.

should be mui and leakless.mostly.

It can't be mostly MUI, so I hope thats directed to leakless.

Use [ TRIGGER][ /TRIGGER] and copy as text on triggers in between the tags to post triggers...

You leak quite a bit, its not MUI. Please refer to the tutorials. I'll leave a 2/5 until updated.

 

[The_Swamp_Warrior]

ill remove the dummies and clear the leaks

 

[Adiktuz]

pleas post the triggers and put a description on what the spell does...

 

[xorkatoss]

well the idea is good but there are some things that you should notice...
-i don't see any use for the dummy so remove it
-you leak some points
-not mui
-dummies have shadows
-dummies are not being removed

here is how the loop trigger should be:

Jumploop

• Jumploop
  • Events
    • Time - Every 0.03 seconds of game time
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
      • If - Conditions
        • (Distance between Jcaster_point and Jtarget_point) Greater than 0.00
      • Then - Actions
        • Set Jmove_point = (Jmove_point offset by 40.00 towards (Angle from Jmove_point to Jtarget_point) degrees)
        • Unit - Move Jcaster instantly to Jmove_point
        • Special Effect - Create a special effect attached to the origin of Jcaster using war3mapImported\Stormshock.mdx
        • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)
        • Custom script: call RemoveLocation(udg_Jmove_point)
      • Else - Actions
        • Trigger - Turn off Jumploop <gen>
        • Unit - Turn collision for Jcaster On

ill give you a 3/5 for now...fix it and it will deserve a 5/5

 

[Magtheridon96]

Nice idea
Unfortunately, this spell leaks, and it isn't MUI
Use an indexing system to make it MUI.
Also, don't forget to Recycle your indexes since the limit is 8192.
I recommend using a DIR system (Dynamic Index Recycling System)

For now, i'd give it a 2/5
Good Job! You didn't get a 1/5 like all the other losers
No offense guys :|
I can help you if you want by the way
Just ask ( in a rep post ;D ) jk jk

 

[The_Swamp_Warrior]

how would i use an "indexing System"?

 

[Magtheridon96]

You should make all your variables (except for the constant ones) arrays.
Create an integer variable and call it index.

Sorry i have no time to continue, but i can give you an example of a spell that recycles indexes.

One minute...

EDIT: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/spells-569/omnislash-v1-30b-161947/
Look at how he indexed all the variables and recycled the index. Index recycling in this case also functions at the end of his loop trigger.

 

[Orcnet]

cool spell, good job!