Shandris1.2.BLP

[Moderator]

01:13, 11th May 2016
~Nightmare:

All desired changes were made. The shading is well done. The face is gorgeous and armor is kickass even though it is so simple. But needs one more color to give a nice atmosphere. But it's fine.

Just a extremely useful simple skin. Although next time you may want to add extra detail to your future skins. Good job btw.

 

[Darthmechas]

Very nice

 

[BiroN]

Wow this metallic armor is pretty interesting.

 

[Deleted member 238226]

you use SAI? didn't find many people texturing with it. mostly i found people that like manga or anime use it. looks nice

i give you 4/5 for your first texture here. keep up the good work

 

[Arad MNK]

Noice.

 

[Moy]

As this is your very first texture, I would like to ask WIPs to remove my suspicion.

To continue. The skin itself is in pretty good condition (for a first texture). Great shading and highlights which itself blends very well with blizzard textures. However, the skin lacks proper detailing. The shoulder pad seems to be plain and looks like a blob. A good shoulderpad design choice may be worth considering as the current one has the same plainness of the armor which is not good. Take a look with this Sentinel Armor example:

Also colors could be fixed as the colors seems to be very similar with different tone. The face is spectacular on the unwrap but when wrapped unto to the model, it looks ugly. Remember that model wrapped is the most important one and should be the one to look beautiful. The face has improper proportions - the eyes, nose, lips etc. Chest could use more shading, that dark shadows casted seems to be weird. The bow and cape seems to be okay but needs a new design that we haven't seen before - something that would capture someone's attention.

Pretty food start would like to see more unless you have provided the things I am asking for. If you do, you could try to improve the texture by following some of my suggestions. Good luck.

 

[Mergly]

As this is your very first texture, I would like to ask WIPs to remove my suspicion.

To continue. The skin itself is in pretty good condition (for a first texture). Great shading and highlights which itself blends very well with blizzard textures. However, the skin lacks proper detailing. The shoulder pad seems to be plain and looks like a blob. A good shoulderpad design choice may be worth considering as the current one has the same plainness of the armor which is not good. Take a look with this Sentinel Armor example:

Also colors could be fixed as the colors seems to be very similar with different tone. The face is spectacular on the unwrap but when wrapped unto to the model, it looks ugly. Remember that model wrapped is the most important one and should be the one to look beautiful. The face has improper proportions - the eyes, nose, lips etc. Chest could use more shading, that dark shadows casted seems to be weird. The bow and cape seems to be okay but needs a new design that we haven't seen before - something that would capture someone's attention.

Pretty food start would like to see more unless you have provided the things I am asking for. If you do, you could try to improve the texture by following some of my suggestions. Good luck.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll take what you said into consideration and get back to you with an updated version.
I'm not exactly sure what you meant by "I would like to ask WIPs to remove my suspicion."? I hope this can help you, as you can see the massive amount of layers to this image in the right.

 

[Moy]

Now I believe. Now all you have to do is to follow some of my suggestions. I can't wait for the update. Just bump if you do an update.

 

[neo_sluf]

I love how you blend the colors perfectly.

Keep up the good work dude. It is simply amazing.

 

[Moy]

That purple trim sadly blends in with the skin color. Some changes are better now i.e face, armor etc. Great job so far.

 

[Mergly]

That purple trim sadly blends in with the skin color. Some changes are better now i.e face, armor etc. Great job so far.

Just uploaded a new version, how's it look?

 

[Mgeterno11]

Looks really nice, the colors works well. 5/5

 

[Warseeker]

Impressive!

 

[Wasabee]

Well done!