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20:09, 25th Mar 2012
ʞııɥs: Quite interesting concept, but why is the bow and arrows red? What material is the red supposed to be? Why is her hair both pink and red? I didn't test in-game, and I doubt the pink hair shows up in-game, but if it doesn't show, make it black to reduce filesize. The shin guards is CNP and glitches because of this, I suggest you paint over it to reduce the repetitiveness. Somewhat similar issue with other CNP parts, such as the cape. The pink borders on gloves and shoes, etc, do not fit in with the leather-y barbarian look of the rest. The orbs on the bow are also out of place, I mean, why green? There's also a general lack of shading and her skin is too pale. There's potential here, though, so keep working on it.
ʞııɥs: Quite interesting concept, but why is the bow and arrows red? What material is the red supposed to be? Why is her hair both pink and red? I didn't test in-game, and I doubt the pink hair shows up in-game, but if it doesn't show, make it black to reduce filesize. The shin guards is CNP and glitches because of this, I suggest you paint over it to reduce the repetitiveness. Somewhat similar issue with other CNP parts, such as the cape. The pink borders on gloves and shoes, etc, do not fit in with the leather-y barbarian look of the rest. The orbs on the bow are also out of place, I mean, why green? There's also a general lack of shading and her skin is too pale. There's potential here, though, so keep working on it.
I like this a lot ^_^
