Saiyan Fight

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Status : Approve
Condition : Average
Review : 1

Note : Battle scenery look fine, but most of the time they seems to just appear all of the sudden at random area. It would be much better if you add some special effect to indicate they have instantly move to the position.

Apart from that, it seems like you used the wrong music for this cinematic. The battle scenery should use a music that full of suspense, but the current music you are using right now failed to show such a impression.

Terrain currently between bad and average, this probably because I have seen hundred of desert like terrain which is far better. Certainly it could used some sort of improvement.

The battle scenery from your previous cinematic look much better compare to this. The quality somehow between 2 and 3, but I would give this resources a rating 3.

This resources is tested and seems to be working fine from starting till the end without any error. As for now, approve.

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[Amigurumi]

Hi, I watched your cinematic, and I liked it, a fast battle between two persons.
I don't like Dragon Ball Z, but that is my opinion. Here's a little review for you:

Pro-points
[+] the battles are well made
[+] nice looking kamehameha-effect (a bit slow I think)
[+] music and sounds

Neutral-points
[~] the terrain is always the same, but you used doodads

Bad-points
[-] When Gohan dies, he is floating over the ground
[-] in the credits, they made their abilities, and then they were doing nothing. Maybe you could make a little battle with their special abilities in the credits, but that's only an example

Overall a nice cinematic, with specialeffects, a lots of action, but a bit short.
Dragon ball Z lovers will love this cinematic, but others too.
I'll give it a 3.95/5

 

[Septimus]

Could be better.

3/5 from me.

 

[Ribenamania]

Well, I'll need to get more feedbacks before improving it. =)

 

[Yearight]

Why does the green guy stand behind the guy with the yeloow hair when he explodes? And i don't like the childish scream he makes. Good cinematic thou. 3.5/5.

 

[ModelTester]

I liked it

 

[gamers_2k]

Please post more descriptions

 

[arphax214]

lol 2/5 not so good..

 

[Mamma_Pappa]

2/5 - OK - Normal resources get this.

Some Typos found.
Gohan is kinda hoovering after he got hit...
Bad Ending, Kamehameha too slow.

But VERY good if it is your second cinematic.

 

[L33T-ViV]

2/5 i didn't like the cinematic sry mate..

 

[ModelTester]

What are the triggers to do the Kamehameha?

 

[Ribenamania]

Creating dummies every X.XX seconds with offset..
This can't be a spell since it causes lag for sure.. =)

 

[Squiggy]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/spells.php?id=1widsw&prev=search=kamehameha&d=list&r=20
OSHII--

 

[dosu123456789]

4/5 i like it

 

[Ribenamania]

Why does the green guy stand behind the guy with the yeloow hair when he explodes? And i don't like the childish scream he makes. Good cinematic thou. 3.5/5.

The green guy you mentioned [Piccolo] is doing a suicide explosion, that's why he sticked to the yellow hair guy [Goku] before he explode.

 

[Super-Sheep]

0/5 dbz

 

[Ribenamania]

0/5 dbz

Simply, wow! Is that a compliment? Flaming? Trolling? Offending?
>< saddening...

 

[Super-Sheep]

1. I didnt watch it.
2. I didnt give a vote.
3. Im not gonna watch it, so you are in safe.

 

[deepstrasz]

2.5/5.
Buncha' kids flying around.