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[RollBoat]

hello everybody ,i was wondering if i could use any of your suggestion about skin that i'm working on,and i was wondering if it's enough freehand for an upload?

 

[Naze]

Whatever you got inside those spoiler tags isn't showing for me. They're empty.

Now the model: I really like the idea! If you made it freehand you shouldn't have a problem uploading it. However some parts of it are poorly shaded, specially the helmet. Come on, give that helmet a real feel of metal! It is just plain grey. Make the lower parts of it with a darker shade, and the top of it with a brighter highlight, as if reflecting the sun. Same could be done to the metal parts of the shield and shoulder pads. Look at these skins for examples of shadows/highlights in metallic material:

Revenant Minion
Dragon Slayer
Twin Knight

 

[RollBoat]