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River

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I was bored again today. So I made this :grin:
River.jpg
Please comment it. :cute:
 
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I like the waterfall very much, looks really realistic!!

But I think there are missing plants between the rocks and as a small tipp, try to add bushes to the basis of the trees, because they always look unrealistic themself.
I don't like the front side of the river too much, because I think it doesn't fit to the other side which looks like a very alpine part and the frontside looks a little less wild!

Needs a little work and then I would like to give you rep for it, so do it:p
 
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I think those are very well done improvements to get better details.
On the other hand now I made out, what I don't like on the frontside of your screenshot, it's the sudden change from normal earth rocks, looking like the rocks were in one line, maybe add some rocks to the earth part, to get some variation!
Keep it up!
 
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Thanks for the comment. I think im going to make a new terrain, not sure what im going to make. :D
 
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I like your river and waterfall. Looks very nice. You probably could have used a different/better camera position, but whatever, it's not a big deal really. To improve the terrain, I think you should add more grasses, bushes, and maybe even flowers on the rocks where the trees are. Otherwise it just looks like trees are growing out of just rocks, which is unrealistic. :wink:

Once you've done that, you should be good.
 
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