Rising Sun

[rushing_epic]

 

[Gilles]

Image isn't working for me.

 

[rushing_epic]

Fixing :\ aww

 

[lord_Turin]

although its a pretty picture, its more a showcase of models than terrain :/

 

[Strydhaizer]

although its a pretty picture, its more a showcase of models than terrain :/

You sh`ld know that terraining always showcase models.

BTW. Sun is okay , now focus on the terrain. You might want to give "effort" (Might be offensive) to it. First , the Environment. Second , the props (You might want to try constructing your house using wood pieces and some B2M roofs) Third , try raising/lowering the terrain , add mountains/cliffs/plateau.

I think these things that ive mentioned are the things that you need to improve.
Good try , rushingepic

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Edit:
Another one ,you should improve your skills in placing tiles. Its really bad.
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Additional :
Use Ufergrass.

 

[Celaquil]

although its a pretty picture, its more a showcase of models than terrain :/

Nah.

My advice would be to actually consider touching the elevation tool, you know, there's this whole separate part called "Terrain" in the pallet, check it out.

Also, units are a big no-no in my book, so I'd remove the rodent.

 

[Gilles]

Also, units are a big no-no in my book, so I'd remove the rodent.

Completely depends how they are used. fladder and 2-P are excellent at using models in order to give narration or emotion to their terrains. Also look at Chaos. (name?) last terrain for the contest.

I agree here though, that rodents too low polygon for this terrain. You should remove or mask by moving it into the mid/background.

 

[rushing_epic]

Thanks for all suggestion
ill make it better in my nxt terrain..