Recent Works (Constructive Criticism Wanted!)

[Jak-The-Ripper]

A town I never finished. An unfinished bridge, an AFK host, and no terrain on. Fate is so sad.

A quickly, and poorly, made temple, for a Bishop/Duke.

Ferelas, ho. In SotDERP I made this small town, and I don`t feel like stretching the entire page to show you the rest of it.

Thoughts/Comments/Criticism?

 

[WhiteTrashBoy]

Dude u rock! but the temple sucks. BUT as u said its poorly made. Oh yeah and the Lair rocks, but i'd add two banners at the entrance. It gives it an "imperialistic" look


OH yeah, btw, the 1st image is broken

 

[Jak-The-Ripper]

Thanks.

And what temple?

 

[Saken]

A quickly, and poorly, made temple, for a Bishop/Duke.

You should only post finished pieces and then ask for criticism, because then we have a full view of what you wanted to make. Thus, we could give you actual criticism and tell you what we think is good/not good. Also, there is a thread for posting screen shots of things you've built.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...g-372/rp-screenshots-iand-rp-creations-37514/

Er, pardon me, someone decided to close that thread for no reason what-so-ever. I'll try to get it re-opened. I have a lot more creations to upload.

 

[Jak-The-Ripper]

ohiseee.

 

[WhiteTrashBoy]

quickly, and poorly, made temple, for a Bishop/Duke.
yeah tht.
keep upthe good work! i wanna see more!

 

[Jak-The-Ripper]

thanks, whitetrashboy. most of my creations are influenced by Saken, who taught me most of my building.

i think I`m going to play a bit today, so maybe I`ll upload some new ones.

 

[WhiteTrashBoy]

awesome! tht's what we wanna see man. I'm with u +rep