Raid Conquest

[Moderator]

17:55, 3rd Sep 2010
Cweener: Rejected (until updated)
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13:08, 5th Sep 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected
There is too much to improve, setting it to needs fix would not be correct here, as you'll just update it with only very few changes while it needs a complete make-over.

 

[Darkzealot_128]

Better description please. Gonna check.

Edit: Blend more tilesets into terrain because right now it looks too plain and this map needs more polishing. Also, I think you should be able to pick your classes because it is kind of gay if you can't. Also all units should start at level one not level three. I recommend that you add a warcraft 3 map preview image and loading screen too to get more downloads.

Overall: Current state is rejection just do what I say and it will maybe just get out of the rejection zone.

Edit: Much better description. =O

 

[-Kobas-]

Please improve description like Darkzealot_128 already said!
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[linkcube]

ok, ill be working on it, though the level 3 helps a lot since when i was testing it, it would seem to hard to do the second boss w/his crits. Ill be working out the class choice as the last thing to your other comments

 

[-Kobas-]

Description is improved, I reported that to moderator!
As soon as he set your map back to pending more users will be able to check it and give their suggestions

Also change that "User who uploaded this Presents" to your name!
I used that there because of possibility of different names!
Example: Created by Linkcube ; Uploaded by: linkcube
One is with low L another with normal one

 

[WherewolfTherewolf]

Review coming soon....
(today or tomorrow)

 

[linkcube]

ty -kobas- for the tutorial, going to fix some stuff right now

 

[Cweener]

Brief overview:

• Triggers leak on massive levels.
• Poor tooltips especially for the heroes. Their tooltips were just wrong.
• Improper icon DISBTNs
• Terrain is boring in areas and lacking doodads in others
• Cameras in opening cinematic don't really make sense in places...

Rejection. 2/5

 

[ap0calypse]

@ Cweener, is good that you rate the map too, some moderators don't even try to rate the map.

That'd be me.
I only give ratings when I do a full review, because if I just look at the map in a very basic way, there will be things I am neglecting or didn't see in the first place, these things can change the overall rating significantly.
I dislike rating a map for such short 'reviews', with only a basic list of information, as it is not nearly enough to come to a complete overview of the map in my eyes.
Got a problem with that?


Basic overview:

• Tooltips are incorrect (e.g.: Rogue: "Level 1: 500 damage per unit / Level 2: 125 damage per unit").
  Additionally, they could use some major improvements to the layout and structure of ALL tooltips (especially the item tooltips).
• The game only supports full house playability, add an automated difficulty setting in addition to a manual option setting.
• You still didn't add DISBTN's.
• Terrain consists out of blizzard cliffs without anything to 'enhance' it, the lava should contain doodads, the rivers should be made with the raise/lower-tool, the walls shouldn't be blizzard cliffs, you must improve the tileset variations and place more environmental doodads where due.
• The deathmist mask is free.
• Change all the item's positions so they are more structured (makes it easier for the players).
• Remove all "Do Nothing"s, fix all memory leaks, combine a lot of triggers. Basically, redo all triggers - there's so much to improve that it'd be easier to just remake them from scratch.

Permanently rejected (yes, no rating).

 

[linkcube]

thanks for the full review ap0calypse, this was my first time to make a map and now I know all the problems , going to try and do that full makeover for it and fix everything as much as possible, thanks for all the feedback on this, may just go to the forums for testing and release after it's actually up to standards