Question

[L2love]

will any1 wish to criticize terrains i make before posting them i did this with some1 but i cant contact him now so will any1?

please have some terraining experience if you can.

 

[Lexandritte]

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That's commas you missed, plus extra.

Post it here if you want criticism.

 

[Belgarath]

You post, people critique, you improve. You don't really need a person to do it before you publish it :/, that's why they're called WIPs.

 

[L2love]

K i don't like posting unfinished things 2 the public for it takes the awe away, and yes i do need more comma i just mostly don't add them because i don't know when i should is all.

 

[Lexandritte]

Get yourself grammar book. For a short, they are put after "OK" at start of sentance, separating two sentances in complex one, listing (that's what I'm doing now for you, and I have totally no idea why I am so generous and kind today), and before "therefore", "because" and other linking words.

 

[L2love]

Let me state 1 thing i tell every1 who try's 2 teach me something involve writing i am retarded.

 

[Celaquil]

Get yourself grammar book. For a short, they are put after "OK" at start of sentance, separating two sentances in complex one, listing (that's what I'm doing now for you, and I have totally no idea why I am so generous and kind today), and before "therefore", "because" and other linking words.

No one is having trouble reading what he is saying, I would rather call that bitching than being "generous" >.>

And L2Love, just do your best on the terrain and then post it when you feel like you cant do more to it, then people will help you make a better terrain. Believe me, it works.

 

[L2love]

if only proxy was here..... o well ill try 2 finish my terrain before i leave.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

commas are not as important on forums as they are in resumes.

if u wish to get ur point across, commas can be useful. If you are in a hurry, on a forum , u dont need commas.

sometimes, i dont even have my commas in the right places.