Proudmoore.blp

[Moderator]

12:48, 27th Jul 2008
THE_END: This is a good start
However, that chainmail is horrendous
And you need to do something more with that face
5 days or this is gone

Edit:
[Rejected]
More than 5 days have passed, and still no changes.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Awh... lol i wanted to do a skin like that.... but now that you took my idea...

I wanted to do a Ghost Zombie Pirate.. with this modell... but anyway... thats an awsome idea... well done budy!

 

[pyropk95]

ya its pretty good...is that free-hand on the cape?

 

[Lord_Firage]

reminds me of pirates of the carribean

 

[War3_Editor]

ya its pretty good...is that free-hand on the cape?

ya.... of course this stuff is freehand

 

[Hawkwing]

Kinda messy. =\

 

[War3_Editor]

where does the messiness show?
ill update if u tell....

 

[Hawkwing]

Well the stuff on his face dosen't really fit and the chest and cape wrap are very messy, you need to fix that on the unwrap.

 

[War3_Editor]

for the chest..... its IMPOSSIBLE.... literally, because it's uneven...
and for the cape..... it's gonna be hard....

 

[Misha]

It's lacking......everything 2/5

 

[StaberFire]

The eyes on the cape and belt seem cartoonish.

As for the chest, you could change it to a texture that isn't symmetrical, like some kind of male or rags.

Other than that, very good skin, I like it alot, especially the face.

 

[Hawkwing]

for the chest..... its IMPOSSIBLE.... literally, because it's uneven...
and for the cape..... it's gonna be hard....

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/f283/anti-noobism-texturing-92402/

Go to the "Dealing with Messy Wraps" part. It's not impossible. Also, don't be offended by the name. You're not a noob =P

It's lacking......everything 2/5

Misha, that's terrible critique. It is not lacking everything but it is lacking in certain areas, please state what those areas are, in your opinion.

 

[War3_Editor]

thnx Hawk! it sure helps....
EDIT: does this mean i have to redo the body???

 

[Traxamillion]

i like the cape...this looks pretty good

 

[Hawkwing]

thnx Hawk! it sure helps....
EDIT: does this mean i have to redo the body???

Not redo. Just adjust. And only one side.

 

[i_mOck_death]

hmm this skin really look salot like cervantes from soul calibur just wiht one sword and not 2 >>but yes very well done job on the cape

 

[War3_Editor]

im sorry to say this hawkwing, but your tutorial doesn't work because yours is a separate two sides, while mine is a plating of metal, so the lines are impossible to recreate into something smooth - Unless, of course if i separate them into two separate lines, making it actually possible to retexturize as something with a smoothed out body...

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

looks good 4/5