Proudmoore.blp

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Basically I wanted to do that texture for a long long time.. Proudmoore is one of my favourite character in the warcraft Lore, with Uther and Lothar, I guess I love big fury warriors :D

Anyway, since I've been working on Scars of Conflict for so long too, I tough making it might, could be useful... (note: he might not be seen in the project, because I have no idea what is going to be the story)

Also, Linaze doesn't know about that project of mine, so I guess it's a surprise for him... so..

SURPRISE LINAZE!
For being such a good dude.. :D

beside that, don't know.. wanted to prove myself I could still compete with the new texturers *cough* Redshift *cough*

:D





Keywords:
Proudmoore, Daelin, Admiral, Pirate, Marine, sea, ship, Caporal, Jaina, warrior, epic, sword, paladin, sailor, fighter, defender, captain
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Proudmoore.blp (Texture)

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09:48, 17th Jun 2010 Dentothor: Yes. I absolutley love this. But the one thing i see wrong with it, is the fact that the green suit and the red scarf thingy clash with the team colour quite a bit. Theres only a few team colours that actually work...

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09:48, 17th Jun 2010
Dentothor:
Dentothor said:
OMG... I shat 3 anchors.

Yes. I absolutley love this. But the one thing i see wrong with it, is the fact that the green suit and the red scarf thingy clash with the team colour quite a bit. Theres only a few team colours that actually work with the skin. Other than that this is top notch quality Mr.Goblin :p
 
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It looks awesome. But, I hope you wouldn't mind for some constructive and friendly criticism, maybe you can improve your skin like this.

So first of all, the color of his clothes. Being an Admiral(leader of a navy, you know :p), green clothes just don't suit him that well. His clothes make him look like some forest ranger or something. I'd recommend black shiny leather instead, or blue(definitely the most fitting color for naval-based characters), or even perhaps red. On a side note, I'm really glad you got the Kul Tiras symbol right. :p

Then there's the whole filter\stock image you seem to be using for clothes... It make it look very ugly in my opinion, gets quite repetitive after a while. I mean those small lines, meant probably to represent the treads.

The metal on his blade and armor also looks very... Rusty, old, something Orcs would use but not Humans. I'd recommend a much, MUCH more shiny look to all the metal on him, with much higher brightness and highlights, kind of like this. As in, instead of rusty iron, try using stainless steel. This also means getting rid of those little "Scratches". Try to do what you do with gold, but in a more light-gray\silver color.

And then, the biggest and most important problem in my opinion... The hair. It looks bad. I know you can do much better than this and I saw you do much better than this. The hair just looks disgusting when it's wrapped on the model, no offense. The dark brown "holes" between each strand of hair are the main problem, they look ugly and when wrapped on the model they seem out of place.

If you try improving those, I can assure you, the skin will look even better than now. And it is completely fucking awesome right now. For now, I'll rate this 4/5.
 
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... Theres already an admiral proudmoore, Jaina Proudmoore, next is there gonna be lady proudmoore, king proudmoore, king proudmoore, i mean i thought the fact that the admiral in there was kinda weird, he's the guy on the case of War2
 

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Pixel sword not for the win.
3/5.

I've seen you comment on multiple very old textures of mine recently. Thank you for the dedication and time :goblin_good_job:

Most of these textures are 6+ year old... I don't tend to fix any of them... for logical reasons= But thanks for the critic none the less :D
 
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